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| Reviewed by Amor Sabor |
11/8/2010 |
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| Truly a beautiful piece. Love the reflection in this and that patio view is not bad either. |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo |
11/2/2010 |
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| Enjoying that quiet moments that are all ours before getting back to the hustle and bustle -- so good to retreat, isn't it? ~Hugs, Elizabeth |
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| Reviewed by Jon Willey |
10/31/2010 |
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| Recognition and submission are evident Dawn. We easily note circumstance we question and do not enjoy. Then in lemming like fashion submit. Views change when perspective is altered. Good or bad? Love and peace o you my dear friend. Jon Michael |
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| Reviewed by TONY NERONE |
10/27/2010 |
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I am sorry Dawn I almost missed this outstanding writing. I certainly can relate to this piece. I am Mr. Lonely Man.
GOD BLESS YOU
TONY |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
10/26/2010 |
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| INDEED IT IS ABOUT PERSPECTIVE... AND SOMEONE WILL BE STANDING ON THEIR BALCONY...WATCHING YOU AS YOU MOVE STRAIGHT AHEAD...GOING ABOUT YOUR DAY. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS, LOVE & FAITH, DAWN. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
10/26/2010 |
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| ahhh yes... how we know of these well-captured feelings, Dawn! But what a beautiful ledge from which to look down, both inwardly and actually. And, of course, even whilst later "rushing past with eyes straight ahead", we can always still stand mentally and conceptually on that tranquil, heavenly balcony notwithstanding.... Always sanctuary in a crowd... xx |
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| Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis |
10/26/2010 |
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| And even as you merge with that world, you are/can be ever the observer - maintaining that awareness that enables you to never lose yourself in/to the crowd, no self-disassociation . . . |
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| Reviewed by Paul Judges |
10/26/2010 |
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| Delightful simplicity, Dawn |
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| Reviewed by richard cederberg |
10/25/2010 |
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You have romantic sensibilities. Reminds me of the analogy of the tree surounding by a circle of people holding hands. All looking at the same thing but seeing something different. Such is life.
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| Reviewed by David Maclellan |
10/24/2010 |
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I guess Dawn if you were never to experience being "one of them" then the serenity of the solitude would be far less appreciated. Your poetic expression is (as always) beautiful!
Best regards
David |
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| Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather |
10/23/2010 |
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| A crowd of one, awesome title. To view the Gorgeous balcony, but, there's the chaos below; the trick is how to stay on the balcony. ~ Morgan |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
10/23/2010 |
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| ther is such a sense of honesty in you poetry, of real life but so peaceful, i enjoy it very much |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
10/23/2010 |
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You have very effectively recreated and shared the moment and the experience born from it via your verses, Dawn. Thank you. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Carol Grace |
10/23/2010 |
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| What a great use of comparison to clear delineate between peace and chaos. And, as usual, your words create images so that we are there. Thanks for sharing. |
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| Reviewed by J'nia Fowler |
10/23/2010 |
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| Refreshing Dawn. J'nia |
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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
10/22/2010 |
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I like how you demostrate how fine that line is; the peace and quiet just feet away from life in motion. Well done.
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by Axilea MU |
10/22/2010 |
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A different perspective that is much needed. Something that I can really feel and understand too.
Axilea |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
10/22/2010 |
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A temporary retreat, Dawn, catching a quiet breath, a way of preparing 'a face to meet the faces that you meet'.
Lovely moment well captured, keeping you balanced and sane.
John |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
10/22/2010 |
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| ..good thing there are times of peace to get thru the rat races :) wonderful work Dawn! |
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
10/22/2010 |
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| As your words suggest, dear Dawn, yours is a magic balcony. -gene, |
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| Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader) |
10/22/2010 |
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| mental preparation for the rat-race. we leave our hermetically sealed micro-environs for the dog-eat-dog world of deadlines, schedules and manic-depression. |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
10/22/2010 |
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Dawn, Looking at the balcony reminds me of a painting of Romeo and Juliet that I have on my wall in my bedroom.
Your poem is very tranquil and peaceful. It is lovely to watch people, like Sage said, it fuels our pens.
Much peace, love and light,
Amber |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
10/22/2010 |
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Soothing words in this one ...
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| Reviewed by Christine Tsen |
10/22/2010 |
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An eloquent poetic observation ~ there are so many passageways in a day, and you wrote of this one cleverly, with grace.
Your balcony is charming!
Blessings,
Christine |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
10/22/2010 |
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We have to cherish those moments of peace before the day begins and we are caught up in daily living.
George |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
10/22/2010 |
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| Yep. It is all in the manner of where, and what, we look and are seeing. Peace and quiet, I have grown accustomed to that joy of life these late years. |
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
10/22/2010 |
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| LOVELY!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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| Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater |
10/21/2010 |
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A bird's-eye view of what makes poetry, Dawn...keep watching...voyeurism gives us the fuel to reload our quills...be well. Blessed Be.
Love,
Sage |
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