|Reviewed by The Poetess
|I love the depth in this. . .the silent walk, the sigh, the enmeshment or empathy. This is an awesome expression of an uncomfortable moment.|
|Reviewed by Joyce Bell
|SILENCE...SOMETIMES...IS GOLDEN. I THINK THIS IS ESPECIALLY TRUE WHEN ONE IS SEARCHING FOR THAT VERY DIFFICULT THING...CALLED...'PERFECTION'. THANKS FOR SHARING, DAWN, AND LOVE, BLESSINGS & MUCH FAITH...TO YOU AND YOURS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS|
|Reviewed by Axilea MU
|An interesting conclusion that questions boundaries in a relationship.
Not an easy answer, because it usually takes time to see where it all comes from.
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|this kind of entanglement speaks of emotional strangulation, perhaps, rather than soulful co-mm-union. The atmosphere is latent with an emotional menace and brooding. The desolation is pretty palpable and you set the scene well. Reminds me a little of the environment of my mudflats! Makes me hitch my breath - excellently achieved poem, Dawn. xx|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Great offering...kinda sad me thinks!!
|Reviewed by D. Vaineo
|a very flowing piece of poetry...
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
|This is quite endearing, visually I can see the syncronity of your bodies walking, silenting thinking and being content to just "be".
Peace, love and light
|Reviewed by Amor Sabor
|Yes, but is that not, as it should be? Beautiful weaving of images.|
|Reviewed by Cryssa C
|There seems to be confusion in these lines... and subdued acceptance of not agreeing, but putting those differences aside because there is no way to separate or divide your heartstrings.
|Reviewed by Gene Williamson
|Or sadly, vice versa. Admire the way you think...and write, Dawn.
|Reviewed by J'nia Fowler
|Interesting observations concerning the subtle differences between enmeshment and interdependence. Well penned. J|
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|VERY NICE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|
|Reviewed by Jon Willey
|Dawn, I believe there is a story of some sadness here. Communications strained,no longer easy nor easily understood. A love dying a slow death of fractured familiarity no longer seeking the thrills of discovery. Love and peace to you my dear friend. Jon Michael|
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo
|I feel as though I have intruded on a very personal and painful moment for one of these two souls -- palpable and powerfully emotive! ~Hugs, Elizabeth|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|a fusion of hearts and souls that become indistinguishable ...
skillfully crafted ...
|Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
|masterful capture of those timeless blurred lines...
wonderful write, dawn.
|Reviewed by neerja gandhi
|awww..thatz sad...life loathes in such relations...nicely expressed Dawn
best wishes, neerja
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Beautiful intensity of sadness pervades these words as if the writer knows the end is near and has resigned herself to seeing it through to the end...
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Thank you for sharing this most meaningful write about relationships, Dawn; truly substance to reflect upon. Love and best wishes,
|Reviewed by Andy Turner
|Hell on Earth. Only the brave dare to move out of the open cage.|
|Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather
|to know someone so well, it's easy to fall in line, but, the fustration of wanting to step out of tune for a moments dance together......for a moment ~ Morgan|
|Reviewed by TONY NERONE
|Poignant and well crafted.
GOD BLESS YOU
|Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
|love the surrender in the blending of the souls...your descriptives always amaze me|
|Reviewed by Marcia Miller-Twiford
|The "togetherness" resounds throughout this masterpiece Dawn. You're a great poet and I like everything your write but this is now one of my new favorites.
|Reviewed by richard cederberg
|"Eyes lower to half mast" - great image Dawn.
Your last line describes well (to me) what all real
relationships should aspire to.
Peace to you ...
|Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
|ah, the commingling of souls. know this messy feeling quite well. excellent piece dawn. i can totally relate.|
|Reviewed by D Johnson
|"wondering why it is so difficult to remember where you end and I begin."
On one hand a relationship is so strong that you find mutual strength or as someone else mentioned; perhaps one of you has lost identity of where you stand in this affair. Dawn, this is an excellent poem...well done
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|Powerfully mysterious, with so many intricate folds to the relationship and setting. This touches me, and I can't help wondering ~ Is she outgrowing this person she's with, but with him because the years have forever sealed them together?
|Reviewed by L Hippler
|There is so much going on in this short poem, Dawn. Very nicely done.|
|Reviewed by stan nassano
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|this is sad-hope lingers though, i believe, for the connections to still be found|
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|Subtly ambiguous, Dawn, good thing/bad thing? The no need for talk scenario or lack of communication..."strained silence" suggests the latter, and yet?
I really love this.
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|Lost in thought, visuals and emotions felt Dawn~
|Reviewed by John Bidwell
|How I wish I didn't understand this so well.
Very well expressed.
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|In depth musing here, Dawn. When we merge our lives with another it is invariably true that we give up some of what make us, us. Sometimes we give too much.|
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|Love falling on deaf ears bounces off and does not connect with the intended heart it was aimed at.