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| Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis |
4/29/2011 |
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| Beautiful! |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner |
4/24/2011 |
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Beautiful ekphrsatic poetry.
Not seen you on here for yonks! |
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| Reviewed by Kay P Devenish |
3/15/2011 |
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Your wistful soul is showing in this delightful poem.
Love from
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) |
1/11/2011 |
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| As always sweet lady lovely writing....sure is nice to read you again I certainly hope everything is ok with you..please stay safe and well..Hugss |
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| Reviewed by Rafika Anderson |
1/4/2011 |
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| I love this tenderly rendered offering, Dawn. You capture well the drama of nature--the intensity of autumn, the threat of impending winter, and the gentlness of spring. Excellent writing. |
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| Reviewed by The Poetess |
12/21/2010 |
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| A sweet yearning for spring |
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| Reviewed by Carol Grace |
12/5/2010 |
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| Your choice of words really bring this piece to life. Carol |
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| Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen |
11/29/2010 |
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i feel this one, dawn!
cozy up to a warm fire & forget the rest!
carolyn |
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| Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg |
11/19/2010 |
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| loving the observations from your world |
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| Reviewed by Axilea MU |
11/14/2010 |
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No warmth in autumn where I live now; only rain! Love the "dormant spirit" and "golden springs".
Axilea |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
11/11/2010 |
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INDEED!...AND WE GO THROUGH THIS EVERY YEAR, WITH GREAT ANTICIPATION AND UNMEASURED APPRECIATION...FOR THE BEAUTIFUL MEMORIES THAT FALL GIVES US. WELL DONE AND ENJOYED. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH....
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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| Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill |
11/8/2010 |
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The gift of Autumn certainly is bittersweet. Nice write Dawn!
Peace,
Dayvid |
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| Reviewed by Jon Willey |
11/7/2010 |
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| Dawn, it is the promise that you elude to that draws upon the emotions so compellingly. I love it my dear friend. Love and peace to you. Jon Michael |
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| Reviewed by John Domino |
11/6/2010 |
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A most creative poem and with heartfelt words of sincerity.
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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
11/6/2010 |
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Dawn, I love the part about your spirit in the winter. Lovely imagery. Hugs,
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
11/5/2010 |
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I agree that some autumn days can bring a longing and a bittersweet "taste" to the soul. I can relate to what you have expressed via your verses here, Dawn. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and best wishes,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather |
11/5/2010 |
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| that describes MA and CT this year, ironically, not so much VT as is usually the case. Enjoyed reading this alot- Morgan |
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| Reviewed by TONY NERONE |
11/5/2010 |
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Wonderfully written piece.
Namaste |
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
11/5/2010 |
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Beautiful picture, Dawn, and words to match.
Autumn is my favorite time of year at the shore.
I'll avoid the ice of winter; one slip is enough!
-gene.
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| Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper |
11/5/2010 |
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| A beautiful picture and beautiful poem to complement it. The second stanza describes this blustery morning here where I live. I woke up and it was shivery cold inside and out. I think, like your poem states, many of us take a dormant attitude through the winter season. A lovely write, Dawn. |
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| Reviewed by Amor Sabor |
11/5/2010 |
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| The Fall brings color in the changing leaves that is brilliant but Spring is my favorite season in California as the colors of the blossoms dictate a special beauty and perfume all their own. Excellent work. |
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| Reviewed by stan nassano |
11/5/2010 |
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| Great photo, our Ky,USA autumn was somewhat stunted due to drought conditions but........your write refreshed my memory of autumn dyas bitterness, thanks for sharing another fine write |
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| Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader) |
11/5/2010 |
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| Yes, I miss those autumn barrages of color, as I grew up in the Northeast. This is beautiful Dawn. Be good always. |
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| Reviewed by Christine Tsen |
11/5/2010 |
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You are so gifted at these poetic "paintings".
You make even me long for spring again as I read, and I'm an Autumn girl! How do you do that?!
Blessings,
Christine |
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| Reviewed by Paul Judges |
11/5/2010 |
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| We can look forward to the warmth of spring....well composed, Dawn. |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
11/5/2010 |
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| Ah, Christine said it so well, huh? I know you don't like the cold weather, but at least you'll have a bit of relief for the next coming two weeks, although it is in the forties here this morning and going down into the thirties tomorrow. BRR |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
11/5/2010 |
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| yes...and inbetween is that blanket of snow..and not a warm one at that :) ..this is beautiful Dawn~ |
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| Reviewed by John Bidwell |
11/5/2010 |
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I really loved this.
I feel so often wistful, but cold helps us appreciate warmth.
Beautiful.
John |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
11/5/2010 |
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| Bittersweet, indeed, and what a marvelous photo. |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
11/5/2010 |
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Reflective, Dawn, in a warm, very personal way and yes, with a bittersweet undertone.
John |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
11/5/2010 |
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| beautifully written! |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
11/5/2010 |
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| Always something to look forward to. |
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
11/5/2010 |
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| EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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