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|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|A very compelling poem that echoes in the soul of the reader, Cody. Thank you. Love and peace to you,
|Reviewed by J AG
|you've created a poetic dagger reflecting anyone who has felt pain and survived the wound ... and like a wound, once these words are read, the reader may go on but will never be the same again... never allow the ink in your pen to cease its flow.|
|Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
|Wow! YOU would love my "Empty DArk HOLe" about #47 or so down! I think you would anyway!
This speaks it so deeply, as if drowning in self doubt!
WElcome to the den Cody Sea!
YOur life is nothing
just something to use
to cause my friends their pain, WOW!
Geez, what is happening to your soul!
Chin up Girl!
WArmly, Warrior Purple Lady Sheeeoox
I have been in it deep (read #58 or so down "My Mom's Husband" and Please BEware, it's blunt and honest to the core, I had to write what I went through, and survived to help another!
I don't want to save you Cody, from all your doubt ( I like your heart and your wording) but, just know that I care!
|Reviewed by dereklee Johnson
|I really enjoyed your poem. I think everyone has felt the heel of somebody pressing down on them.|
|Reviewed by Sandie May Angel-Joyce
|People will judge you no matter how good or bad you are. It's human nature that some like to cause misery in others. They seek happiness at the expense of another's misery. So, don't be fooled by these people, they are not the judges, their judgment do not make you. You are your own judge. Always be yourself, and be kind to yourself. Those who love you WILL love you for being you.
Love and Hugs,
Sandie May Angel :o)