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benighted relapse by Cody of'the SEA Wednesday, May 07, 2008 Rated "PG13" by the Author. Share Print Save Become a Fan the sadness came out again today
ripped through my soul and showed it's face I tried to stop it, but the words flowed out surely the wrong time, I'm sure the wrong place oh I'm clawing through the ice but the pain still resides I try to go on yet of course I can't forget and I don't want to I like to remember her even though what happened just rips apart my soul oh it's so confusing so depressing got me down though I'm trying for that...I hope she'd be proud.

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Reviewed by Selene Skye	6/4/2008

Sharp and keen, I can almost hear the sounds of pain, and for me it is a looking glass. Hugs Selene




Reviewed by Michelle Mead	5/12/2008

Very sad, emotions so on the edge and raw.




Reviewed by Felix Perry	5/7/2008

Strong and honest write from the heart that tells of the pain of your loss. Fee




Reviewed by Karen Palumbo	5/7/2008

Awww, your heartache and pain comes through in this piece. Yet, the perseverence to continue trying.... Be always safe, Karen




Reviewed by Lavendar Jazz	5/7/2008

a powerful and painful write...beautiful things remembered sometimes hurt, but we find a way to forge ahead.