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| Reviewed by Melony Cooper |
8/14/2009 |
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Well done! Very creative.
Mel |
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| Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper |
8/13/2009 |
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| Edwin, this is definitely an interesting poem that seems to have underlying facets that might be interpreted more than one way. The "stain" seems to be a sickness of the soul that makes one "different" that has created pain by the loss of a lover. "Dry Cleaner" had me reading the poem twice to look for shades of subtley. |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo |
8/4/2009 |
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| That is quite a devoted kind of love. Touches the heart! ~Elizabeth :) |
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| Reviewed by Richard Orey |
8/3/2009 |
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Haven't we all noticed the stain? It seems stains are an integral part of life. If you haven't noticed a stain, then you aren't living.
A unique, innovative write, Edwin. Good job!
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| Reviewed by Jon Willey |
8/3/2009 |
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| clever, very clever Edwin -- it is very reminiscent of a song I am fond of -- "Making Memories of Us", by Rodney Crowell -- "and I'm going to love you like nobody loves you -- and I'll earn your trust making memories of us" -- your poem grabs at the realities of love and dedication, with a flair for the novel -- well done my friend -- peace and love -- Jon Michael |
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| Reviewed by Juliet Waldron |
7/30/2009 |
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| Funny and cool! I hope she got the message! |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart |
7/30/2009 |
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| Beautifully penned. |
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
7/28/2009 |
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| EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
7/28/2009 |
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awww Edwin this is of sweetness and written from a big heart..wonderful compassionate write.
Blessings, Christine |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
7/27/2009 |
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Edwin, it's good to read you,this is a strong well
written declaration of love! A beautiful poem with
a message I hope she welcomes!
Eileen |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
7/27/2009 |
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Sweet, endearing and very uplifting to the spirit...
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Lori Moore |
7/27/2009 |
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| Cute. It's always nice to have a "quicker-lift-you-upper" around. |
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| Reviewed by Nicole Weaver |
7/27/2009 |
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Edwin,
Cheer genuis! Very good use of words. Simply one word! GREAT!
Nicole |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
7/27/2009 |
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| VERY GOOD WRITE OF 'TAKING ANOTHER CHANCE ON LOVE'. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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| Reviewed by Masimba Mukichi |
7/27/2009 |
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| Brilliant write.Keep up the good work Edwin. |
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| Reviewed by Dale Clark |
7/27/2009 |
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| Clever verse, Edwin, great read! |
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| Reviewed by D Johnson |
7/27/2009 |
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Edwin, a truly enjoyable read.... I loved "the quicker lift you upper"
Cheers,
Dan |
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| Reviewed by Bennett Kremen |
7/27/2009 |
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| I like the intensity in your poem. So many of us have so much to offer. Finding each other is the rub. Your poem deals with that. Thanks. |
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| Reviewed by Rose Rideout |
7/27/2009 |
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There are lots of fish in the sea and there is one fish that's waiting just for that special person to catch them. Thank you for sharing Edwin.
Newfie Hugs, Rose |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) |
7/27/2009 |
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| Excellent writing sweet man...sighhhh..well done indeed...have a wonderful and safe day..Hugsss |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
7/27/2009 |
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They call me leopard, no spiritual dry-cleaner will touch my stains!
Georg
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
7/27/2009 |
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I love the intensity, the compassion, the clear-eyed realism, the down-to-earth desire to bless and to heal and to succour in this fabulous write, Edwin. And especially the strength and support in these amazing lines:
Kiss the pain
Kiss the dirt
Kiss the stain
Kiss the hurt
Goodbye!
thank you, Kate xx |
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| Reviewed by Stuart McCallum |
7/27/2009 |
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Edwin, you are 'truly' one of the great poets on this site--and, quite frankly, anywhere.
Perfect, my friend, much enjoyed. |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
7/27/2009 |
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Down to earth and very real this poetry comees from the heart and reminds me of the movie where the boy is always just there in the background lovin but never being loved.
fee |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
7/27/2009 |
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| False promises are always sugar coated but are bitter when swallowed. |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
7/27/2009 |
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| Lucky woman who latches on to you, Edwin. Well said my friend. |
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