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by Edwin Hurdle
Tuesday, October 20, 2009
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You're a blind woman without being handicap
Your man is not treating you with respect
He verbally abuses you,put you down,belittle you
He doesn't accept the beauty you have from within
He's an ungrateful basterd with no appreciation for what you have mean to him
Yet you still want to be with him
You still want to stay with him
He's like a piece of dog poop on a street corner that can't be change into something beautiful.
Its time to dump him like the piece of garbage he truly is
Hold my hand and come with me sweetheart
Touch my heart.It is beating for you and you only
Touch my lips with your lips as we kiss each other into happiness
Touch my tears as they are a calling to be with you.
You will live a Muhammad Ali lifestyle in terms of making you feel like you're the greatest in this world.
Feel my cuddles and hugs as they make you feel a gazillion times better
Most of all,feel the love that I have for you
Our bond will never be Rocky because you are my Adrian

Copyright(c)2009 Edwin Hurdle

 

 

 



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Reviewed by JMS Bell 3/3/2010
IN A SITUATION LIKE THIS...THE ONLY THING TO DO IS...BACK UP UNTIL THE OTHER PARTY REGAINS THEIR 'SIGHT'. OTHERWISE, YOU'LL FIND YOURSELF 'BLIND'...LIKE HER. FANTASTIC WORK WITH A DYNAMIC MESSAGE. THANKS, EDWIN AND BLESSINGS. LOVE, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE 12/19/2009
Strong writing, with a dynamic punch at the close! Loved the ending so much, but getting there was half the fun! Thanks by the way, for the kind review of In Group We Trust. Nice of you to drop by for a visit.

-Roger
Reviewed by Sandra Corona 12/2/2009
Love is blind and reason has no meaning to the heart.

If you wrote this to a particular lady, I hope she seriously considered your plea as an alternative :).

Write on!
Sandy
Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green 11/1/2009
Talk about a Knight in Shining Armor! Far too many women have had their bodies and spirits pummeled to bits. It takes a love like you describe to bring one back to life. The empathy with which you write and the love that shines through every word are wonderful to see. Do mean s e e. I N S P I R I N G !!!! With gratitute, respect, and affection, 'Pea'
Reviewed by Terry Robertson 10/31/2009
This is great! Love takes many roads, wrong turn and it is abusive. Nice imagery, Edwin.
Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse 10/29/2009
offer her the vision of truths Edwin...
Some simply cannot see...
Peace, Love & Inspirations
Vickie
Reviewed by Zahra V 10/29/2009
Very outspoken of you Edwin. Sometimes we need to hear the truth and sometimes when you are in a situation, you are incapable of seeing it!

Zahra V
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 10/25/2009
This is moving and meaningful, Edwin. I pray that only good will come of your aspirations. Love and peace to you,

Regis
Reviewed by A PAX 10/23/2009
awwwwwwwww
loved the ending.........this is priceless.....what a heart you have...:)
I hope you win :)
Reviewed by Inspire Hope 10/23/2009
"Braille" words of depth very profound and also
true! Well Edwin you have done it again powerful
excellent write! Be encouraged and keep on sharing
your gift with the world, what a blessing you are!

Much Love
Always!!
Reviewed by kg cummings 10/22/2009
only the blind couldn't see the feeling behind these words. very good work. Hugs, Kathy
Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson 10/21/2009
beautiful appeal yes i agree with ET Waldron
Reviewed by E T Waldron 10/21/2009
This is surely a powerful appeal, Edwin!
I hope she responds favorably!Excellent poem!
Reviewed by Christine Alwin 10/20/2009
Heartfelt touching write....I pray all works out
Christine
Reviewed by John Domino 10/20/2009
"Right on Target" Edin!

JMD
Reviewed by Rose Rideout 10/20/2009
Sounds like this lady needs a real man to take care of her and you could fill the order Edwin.

Newfie Hugs, Rose
Reviewed by John Flanagan 10/20/2009
Edwin,
Strong and fine writing.

John
Reviewed by Bennett Kremen 10/20/2009
It's a mystery sure enough why people give and accept abuse. Using blindness to explain it makes sense. Take care,
Ben K
Reviewed by D Johnson 10/20/2009
Edwin, this is a great little love story, well told.

Cheers,
Dan
Reviewed by Michael Jones 10/20/2009
Hi Edwin sounds like a man in love that needs to tell that woman so. A good love story. Peace!!!
Reviewed by Felix Perry 10/20/2009
Very moving and would be a hard offer for most women to turn down in that situation...sadly all too many don't see the abuse they accept.
fee
Reviewed by Georg Mateos 10/20/2009
Many are in need of a white cane for their emotional lives, going around blindingly hurting the real blind that can see.
A kind heart will no see lifeless eyes, it will go beyond it, immersing himself in the deeps of Adrian's heart...

Georg

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