|Reviewed by JMS Bell
|IN A SITUATION LIKE THIS...THE ONLY THING TO DO IS...BACK UP UNTIL THE OTHER PARTY REGAINS THEIR 'SIGHT'. OTHERWISE, YOU'LL FIND YOURSELF 'BLIND'...LIKE HER. FANTASTIC WORK WITH A DYNAMIC MESSAGE. THANKS, EDWIN AND BLESSINGS. LOVE, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS|
|Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE
|Strong writing, with a dynamic punch at the close! Loved the ending so much, but getting there was half the fun! Thanks by the way, for the kind review of In Group We Trust. Nice of you to drop by for a visit.
|Reviewed by Sandra Corona
|Love is blind and reason has no meaning to the heart.
If you wrote this to a particular lady, I hope she seriously considered your plea as an alternative :).
|Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
|Talk about a Knight in Shining Armor! Far too many women have had their bodies and spirits pummeled to bits. It takes a love like you describe to bring one back to life. The empathy with which you write and the love that shines through every word are wonderful to see. Do mean s e e. I N S P I R I N G !!!! With gratitute, respect, and affection, 'Pea'|
|Reviewed by Terry Robertson
|This is great! Love takes many roads, wrong turn and it is abusive. Nice imagery, Edwin.|
|Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
|offer her the vision of truths Edwin...
Some simply cannot see...
Peace, Love & Inspirations
|Reviewed by Zahra V
|Very outspoken of you Edwin. Sometimes we need to hear the truth and sometimes when you are in a situation, you are incapable of seeing it!
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|This is moving and meaningful, Edwin. I pray that only good will come of your aspirations. Love and peace to you,
|Reviewed by A PAX
loved the ending.........this is priceless.....what a heart you have...:)
I hope you win :)
|Reviewed by Inspire Hope
|"Braille" words of depth very profound and also
true! Well Edwin you have done it again powerful
excellent write! Be encouraged and keep on sharing
your gift with the world, what a blessing you are!
|Reviewed by kg cummings
|only the blind couldn't see the feeling behind these words. very good work. Hugs, Kathy|
|Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
|beautiful appeal yes i agree with ET Waldron|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|This is surely a powerful appeal, Edwin!
I hope she responds favorably!Excellent poem!
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|Heartfelt touching write....I pray all works out
|Reviewed by John Domino
|"Right on Target" Edin!
|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|Sounds like this lady needs a real man to take care of her and you could fill the order Edwin.
Newfie Hugs, Rose
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
Strong and fine writing.
|Reviewed by Bennett Kremen
|It's a mystery sure enough why people give and accept abuse. Using blindness to explain it makes sense. Take care,
|Reviewed by D Johnson
|Edwin, this is a great little love story, well told.
|Reviewed by Michael Jones
|Hi Edwin sounds like a man in love that needs to tell that woman so. A good love story. Peace!!!|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Very moving and would be a hard offer for most women to turn down in that situation...sadly all too many don't see the abuse they accept.
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|Many are in need of a white cane for their emotional lives, going around blindingly hurting the real blind that can see.
A kind heart will no see lifeless eyes, it will go beyond it, immersing himself in the deeps of Adrian's heart...