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| Reviewed by Marlene Dawn |
2/6/2003 |
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| Great writing! |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) |
2/6/2003 |
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"And then You tell me in the silent gust of the wind
That you don’t need my forgiveness.
And all you ask is that I forgive myself……"
Wonderful lines...
~E
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| Reviewed by Betty Tesh (Reader) |
2/2/2003 |
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| Breathtaking! |
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| Reviewed by coni lea harris |
1/29/2003 |
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| I agree with Michael,,, |
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| Reviewed by michael horetsky (Reader) |
1/26/2003 |
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| Man is his own worst enemy.. well presented my friend..Cheers! |
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| Reviewed by Oisín Breen |
1/26/2003 |
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| very moving. Very well written . Namaste |
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| Reviewed by Mari Laureano (Reader) |
1/25/2003 |
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| In these times of trouble, these words burn so true. **Mari** |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
1/24/2003 |
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| amazing and extremely powerful write |
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| Reviewed by ♥ Kari Hirshey ♥ (Reader) |
1/23/2003 |
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Beautiful! Such a moving piece, thanks for sharing it. :)
~Kari~ |
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| Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci |
1/23/2003 |
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Wow! This is really an amazing and extremely powerful write! Excellent Poem!
Maria |
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| Reviewed by Tien Avielle |
1/23/2003 |
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| and all I ask is that we mortals start acting more godlike and stop the "undoing" ... Your poem is a reflection from a brilliant mind, and moved me deeply (i.e. I copied and pasted it to my keepsies file.) |
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| Reviewed by Sally Montoye |
1/23/2003 |
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Amen to this!!!
excellent write. |
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| Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers |
1/23/2003 |
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| This carries many messages,,beautifully crafted,,Lisa |
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| Reviewed by Sara Wadington |
1/23/2003 |
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A Very powerful poem! Sadly true of how things are~ if only more eyes could see it...
The last stanza is so moving~
Anwer this is very beautifully written~~;)
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) |
1/23/2003 |
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| This is POWERFUL. Exceptional work, Anwer. |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
1/23/2003 |
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THIS IS AN EXCELLENT AND BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN
PIECE, GREAT WRITE.
WILLIAM |
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| Reviewed by Cathrine Hottran |
1/23/2003 |
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| This is truly a great poem |
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