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One So Young
by Jasmine pina
Friday, October 12, 2007
Rated "PG" by the Author.
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A response to another poem.

As the days are numbered

Time has elapsed

Instability of life
Heart and spirit collapse


Laughter is lost

Through Soaring Emotion

Tears of sadness

With unlikely potion


Hourglass shattered

The Sands of departure

A life of memories

Innocent and immature


Here at this hour

Beyond reason and doubt

A life so fragile

Been lost and forced out


I


Understand


One so young



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Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Hourglass shattered
The Sands of departure
A life of memories
Innocent and immature

Meaningful, symbolic imagery, Jasmine. Love and best wishes,

Regis
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Very sensitively written, a sweet write, enjoyed...

Be safe,
Karen
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