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My Hat and Two by Two--Two Poems by Jo Janoski Tuesday, December 05, 2006 Rated "G" by the Author. Share Print Save Become a Fan Two poems for a workshop assignment.
A workshop assignment, a triolet about winter weather. I've done two. The first is for fun; the second, more serious. MY HAT! Breeze sends my hat sailing through air. I race behind, sliding on ice. Wintry weather messes my hair. Breeze sends my hat sailing through air. Snow falls come, don't know what to wear. No way to be warm and still look nice. Breeze sends my hat sailing through air. I race behind, sliding on ice. TWO BY TWO Snowflakes streaming two by two in perfect winter conformation. Devising ice dances anew Snowflakes streaming two by two. Waltzing, swirls, pirouettes, too. Wintry dance transformation. Snowflakes streaming two by two in perfect winter conformation. Copyright 2006 JO Janoski

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Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson	12/9/2006

Nice work stranger.. I'm shivering.....




Reviewed by jude forese	12/9/2006

winter is such an invigorating time of hear and both poems portray its wonder splendidly ...




Reviewed by Regis Auffray	12/5/2006

I love winter. I love your poems. I have a daughter named, Jo�lle. She's known as "Jo." I have to admit that's what caught my attention here. But I'm glad it did because I enjoyed these poems. Thank you for sharing your gifts. Love and peace, Regis




Reviewed by Connie Faust	12/5/2006

Wintry poems written two by two, I liked them both, much thanks to you. Connie




Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks	12/5/2006

I can just picture your hat flying about...and you slipping/sliding trying to fetch it! Also like the image of two-by-two snowflakes dancing and prancing - a delightful ballet through the air... Good ones, JO! Micke




Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)	12/5/2006

I love both of them. Very well done. I am not cut for such poems, but yours are perfect. Victor




Reviewed by Rusty Daily	12/5/2006

Difficult to write but, IMHO, your poems are A-ces. Rusty




Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)	12/5/2006

Then go au natural on the first. OOOO the second i dreamt i was floating on a snowflake last night. Prolly been watching fantasia too much... Superb craftmanship, but you teach will still find fault..lol