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My Hat and Two by Two--Two Poems
by Jo Janoski

Tuesday, December 05, 2006
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Two poems for a workshop assignment.

A workshop assignment, a triolet about winter weather. I've done two. The first is for fun; the second, more serious.


Breeze sends my hat sailing through air.
I race behind, sliding on ice.
Wintry weather messes my hair.
Breeze sends my hat sailing through air.
Snow falls come, don't know what to wear.
No way to be warm and still look nice.
Breeze sends my hat sailing through air.
I race behind, sliding on ice.


Snowflakes streaming two by two
in perfect winter conformation.
Devising ice dances anew
Snowflakes streaming two by two.
Waltzing, swirls, pirouettes, too.
Wintry dance transformation.
Snowflakes streaming two by two
in perfect winter conformation.

Copyright 2006 JO Janoski

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Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson 12/9/2006
Nice work stranger..
I'm shivering.....
Reviewed by jude forese 12/9/2006
winter is such an invigorating time of hear and both poems portray its wonder splendidly ...
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 12/5/2006
I love winter. I love your poems. I have a daughter named, JoŽlle. She's known as "Jo." I have to admit that's what caught my attention here. But I'm glad it did because I enjoyed these poems. Thank you for sharing your gifts. Love and peace,

Reviewed by Connie Faust 12/5/2006
Wintry poems written two by two,
I liked them both, much thanks to you.

Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks 12/5/2006
I can just picture your hat flying about...and you slipping/sliding trying to fetch it!

Also like the image of two-by-two snowflakes dancing and prancing - a delightful ballet through the air...

Good ones, JO!

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader) 12/5/2006
I love both of them. Very well done. I am not cut for such poems, but yours are perfect. Victor
Reviewed by Rusty Daily 12/5/2006
Difficult to write but, IMHO, your poems are A-ces.
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) 12/5/2006
Then go au natural on the first.
OOOO the second i dreamt i was floating on a snowflake last night.
Prolly been watching fantasia too much...

Superb craftmanship, but you teach will still find

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