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Erica Kaiserin Mendoza
Thursday, January 30, 2003
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Let me be with the one
Who knows how to play
My game.
The one who can win
And make me lose
For a change.
The one who knows the rules
And would not dare
Cheat.
The one who celebrates
His victory and my defeat
Smiling.
Let me be with the one
Who can play with me
Unconditionally.
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| Reviewed by J. Murphy |
4/23/2003 |
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| I like this one a lot. Great job. J. |
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| Reviewed by Jeremy Vaeni |
3/12/2003 |
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| Gosh, a cute, smart gal who wants a man to treat her like crap. Whodda thunk? |
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| Reviewed by Red Matrix |
2/21/2003 |
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Excellent!
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| Reviewed by Micha Julian |
2/19/2003 |
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love this, somehow you've got me thinkin' here, yes, and this, hmmm, love it...why not?!
This touches on an intersting question...and I don't know the answer, but I relate somhow...
and very, very well done!
mi
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
2/4/2003 |
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Very good indeed Erica!!!!!
Sandie Angel :o) / Sandie May |
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| Reviewed by Deanna Jones (Reader) |
1/31/2003 |
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| Very cool. ;-) |
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| Reviewed by na na (Reader) |
1/31/2003 |
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Yes Erica, I too think it is very creative. Almost sonds like a song in my
heart. Bill |
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| Reviewed by Eileen |
1/30/2003 |
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| What a surprise;-) creative write as you always did!Good to see you... |
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