|Reviewed by Z McClure
|There is only one hope in this universe, and it is not within self.
|Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
|what a beautiful poem...|
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|Powerful and so well done,
|Reviewed by na na (Reader)
|Erica, yes finding nothing can be good luch. I find devils and witches and beasts. So sometimes I wish that I would encounter nothing once in a while. How is my beautiful Lady. Hugs.. Bill|
|Reviewed by Melissa Rives
|Powerful, reaching into the depths of the soul...splendid writing.|
|Reviewed by Jeremy Vaeni
|You search and you find nothing. So what does that tell you about the search? You're the lucky one and you don't know it: Most who search find what they are looking for. Problem is, it's their own self-delusion "found."|
|Reviewed by ya mama (Reader)
|Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
|As always...great writing....great mind....Ty, Dani|
|Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*®
|An awesome expression of deep despair. Keep writing to find your way out. ~Joseph|
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
|This is so very excellent.
|Reviewed by Anwer Sher
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Lovely work. Bravo.|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Well written Erica, I sense such deep yearning...I'm hoping for new rains to come and refresh the old ways with new life;-)|
|Reviewed by Tim Horton (Reader)
|The search should never end. I felt this write. Very good piece,
|Reviewed by Erica Ivory
|Tomorrow I wait not
The will I deserted
A choice bestowed
A choice remained.
Cursed by fate
Choices I make.
Stumbled in darkness
As I forcefully pray
The Hail Mary
Relume my life
How sad .. I feel this deep loss in this writing.. Excellent work!