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Glorious Theatrics
by Jackie (Micke) Jinks
Wednesday, April 02, 2008
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...storms are a fact of life in Texas; beautiful, but can be dangerous


 


Glorious Theatrics

So quiet and still;
not a leaf stirring in the trees.
Late evening skies cast a pinkish-yellow shade,
announcing the advent of brewing storms.

KABOOM shouts Thunder in the background, 
soon followed by bright SPOTLIGHTS of Lightning -  the show is about to start;

the orchestra lights have dimmed.

PITTY-PITTY-PATTER , the Rains begin; 
followed by a chorus of 
KLINKITY-KLINKITY-KLATTER from Hail-stones.
as they hit soft and solid matter.

The skies open to a down-pour, 
emitting the dank, musky scent of wet earth.
Many acts later, Lightning, Thunder, Rain, Hail
bow to their performance on opening night. 

Spring storms may be dangerous,
but they sure know how to put on glorious theatrics!


Original © Jackie (Micke) Jinks, May, 2005

(not previously posted on A.D.)

 

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Reviewed by Kate Burnside
... and all for free! :)) Nothing can put on a show like Nature herself... and, as Andy says, she knows how to tease, tantalise.... and absolutely TERRIFY!!! Expressive writing, Jackie. TY Kate xx
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Yet it's the danger that makes them so awesome...
Reviewed by John Leko
...well penned words...take us right to the orchestra...seated in your theatre of poetry...one applauds the direction, conduction, and technical lighting...you so vividly color on opening night.
excellent write Micke...
John
Reviewed by E T Waldron
You create your own magical theatrics with this poem Micke!;-)
Great work!

Love,
ET
Reviewed by richard cederberg
Amen to that! This is simply wonderful and you have enhanced your write with a great choice of descriptors that deliver the sounds and feelings like a painter. Well done!
Richard
Reviewed by Bonnie May
What an exciting write and felt the rains pitter pat. Loved it. Love, Bonnie
Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Around the world is a continuos performance in the skies of the Spring announcing its arrival with a little bit of too much entusiasm.

Georg
Reviewed by Mr. Ed
The show is about to start

And what a show Mother often provides. I love Her PITTY-PITTY-PATTER musical intro, and the smell of that wet earth, especially in the Spring.
Reviewed by George Carroll
Great imagery showing how nature rules.
Reviewed by Randall Barfield
The fright and glee at the same time. I remember those from childhood. We were excited cause something was happening that nobody could stop. No adult had any power over! We all were helpless leaves that blew so easily in the wind. Nice EFFECTS! Cheers
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Jackie,

That pic of anvil lightning is beautiful, as is the imagery of the sky performing. :) Well done!

As I wrote in my message to you, I look at storms the only way I can - scary - try to see the beauty, but nothing, to me, is beautiful about large hail or tornadoes! The clouds, the lightning, yes, but not the other things. Know what I mean? Keep Karen and I in prayer. :(

((((HUGS)))) and love, Karla. *Stay safe, 'k?*
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
You have described it all very well. The sounds of natures orchestra playing a full symphony it seems....

Be always safe,
Karen
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
Storms are one performance I'd rather NOT see. Sorry, but I am a stormphobic; storms terrify me, especially if there's ANY mention of tornadoes. Have already been in four--and no underground shelter to speak of! CRAZY!!

STill, a good write about one of my least favorite things; well penned/illustrated!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your Tx. friend, Karen Lynn. :(
Reviewed by Connie Faust
I like your approach in Glorious Theatrics, likening the storm to a theatrical performance. You made me smell that "dank, musky wet earth" as I felt the storm vying for an Oscar. Nice work!

Connie
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