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| Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic |
11/1/2005 |
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by Jove you're good..love it!
vesna :) |
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| Reviewed by Janet Caldwell |
5/20/2005 |
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This must be the witch that stole my former hubby...:sigh: ;)lol
Really this is beautiful, thank you for the prayers, the transplant is on.
Janet xoxoxo |
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| Reviewed by E. Richardson |
5/17/2005 |
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| excellent structure and rhyme scheme, so much so it has a sonnet feel to it. Splendid work, Robin |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
5/16/2005 |
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| tightly developed quatrains defining your desire quite effectively ... |
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| Reviewed by Handsum Hart |
5/15/2005 |
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I've meet her before, or someone just like her.
A splendid write
Blue skies and sunshine
HH |
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| Reviewed by Cathrine Hottran |
5/14/2005 |
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| good write! |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
5/14/2005 |
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Robin, you have outdone yourself with this gem!
Everything came together, pic content, and your
exceptional word choice,rhyme, and rhythm! Kudo's!
Eileen |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
5/14/2005 |
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| The rhythm, rhyme and image all complement one another to achieve a powerful poetic effect, Robin. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace. Regis |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
5/14/2005 |
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| Quite a captivating poetic tale, Robin. |
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| Reviewed by Danielle Mundy |
5/14/2005 |
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| I like the rhythm of this as well as the story you tell...excellent write :) |
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| Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU |
5/14/2005 |
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Rhythm, knowledge, art and contents meet through an imagery grand to compose "Desire", which flows on waves of the sea of imagination to strike and inspire the readers´ souls.
Long healthy creative life may You enjoy, Sublime Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU |
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| Reviewed by Dennis Shartlesville (Reader) |
5/14/2005 |
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| Wow poor victim …but what a way to go! Very nice Robin, very nice. |
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