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| Reviewed by Kathryn Seifert, Ph.D. |
5/10/2009 |
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I love it. Great imagery.
Kathy |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Price |
3/13/2009 |
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| "I want to wear you like a breath..." Love the description here. Awesome passion and writing. Liz |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
3/7/2009 |
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Sheila, this is a rare beauty! It arouse the passion
within the sensual ambience you project! Suprb!
Love,
Eileen |
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| Reviewed by richard cederberg |
3/2/2009 |
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You tell it well dear Sheila. A lovely poetic cornucopia of feelings and sensual imagery. You and your husband have something very special together. enjoyed!
Blessings ... |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
3/1/2009 |
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| passionately textured and simply lovely ... |
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| Reviewed by SOULFUL SHEE G. Pulsing In Passionate Purple PassionS |
3/1/2009 |
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Ooooooooooooooooh! NICE, love the built up feelings HERE! Sheila!
Let the Rocket take off!
Sensous imageries!
WRITE ON!
Warmest of Blessings, Love and Light, Warrior Purple Lady SHEExooo |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
2/28/2009 |
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Beauitiful, romantci and opassionate write
Love & peace be with you
William |
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| Reviewed by Romantic Poetess Victoria L. McColley |
2/26/2009 |
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and inside the arms of passions breadth we find our soul's love
the very gifts of your words expressing the intimate touch of divinity
Lovely
Much Love & Inspirations
Vickie |
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| Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle |
2/24/2009 |
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Magnificent and wonderful poem,take care
Edwin |
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| Reviewed by Jon Willey |
2/22/2009 |
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| the alert has been sounded, passion is launched -- let here be no interruption 'til we have reached the rainbow's arch -- only then shall our contentment be given its opportunity to verbalize pleasure's throes -- steamy with excitement and eroticism Sheila -- well said -- much love and peace to you my friend -- JMW |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Wilson |
2/22/2009 |
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| This is beautiful...and your opening line, so sensual. |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
2/21/2009 |
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Sheila,
Karla's right, the opening line is a hook, a marvellous one, and from then on the poem's a celebration of lovemaking, sensual and erotic. Exceptional!
John |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo |
2/21/2009 |
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| "I want to wear you like a breath" ... I want to own that line! That alone is worth the price of admission (as the saying goes). Your second strophe is beautifully visual and ends softly. Lovely! Hugs, Elizabeth |
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| Reviewed by Santosh Kalwar |
2/21/2009 |
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| Sexy it is and sexy your writings. |
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| Reviewed by A PAX |
2/21/2009 |
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| I love the first two lines you have here Sheila, you are a very methoric and visual writer, this is passionate and softly romantic, wow, pax A |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
2/21/2009 |
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Magnificently orgasmic, Sheila. What else can I "say?" Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson |
2/21/2009 |
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| Exceptionally well expressed, Shela! |
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| Reviewed by * Starman * * |
2/21/2009 |
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Overlapping passionate verses drive the reader into intensity of thought. Contained herein, is a young poetic sapling yielding to the winds of metaphorical desire. This is a magnificent, sensual, exciting, quality, that makes the reader fall backwards into that exploding rainbow world of yours forever! Oh my...Whew!
Starman |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
2/21/2009 |
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| Love the imagery in this passionate poem that leaves the reader content to know that passions desire is fulfilled. |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
2/21/2009 |
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Ilove the easy rythem of this write that seems to almost feel like the lovemaking of which your write. Very sensual, very caring and very satisfying...sweet...
hugs
Fee |
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| Reviewed by Mary Lacey |
2/21/2009 |
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Sheila,
Beautiful love poem
Mary |
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| Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper |
2/21/2009 |
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| Sensuously descriptive and eautifully expressed. Nicely done, Shelia. |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
2/21/2009 |
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This bursts off of the page and into the mind - WOW. EXCELLENT, Sheila. The opening line is a hook! Drags the reader in for a totally satisfying catch (and release!). BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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