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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Price |
4/12/2009 |
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| Beautifully awesome. Liz |
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| Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle |
4/8/2009 |
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This is very beautiful,I enjoy reading it,take care
Edwin |
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| Reviewed by Axilea Uzumcuoglu |
4/7/2009 |
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Lovely piece Sheila. I really like that third stanza, "stone collapsed in dust" and "salt rubbed in a wound" go together perfectly and their imagery speaks to the reader.
Axilea |
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| Reviewed by richard cederberg |
4/6/2009 |
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This is interesting Sheilafriend
and substantive in its rationale.
Each stanza has fifteen syllables, 5-5-5,
and six stanzas to complete the thought process.
I like chaining these little guys together
mysterious indeed!
a unique poetic invention...
Blessings ... |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Wilson |
4/5/2009 |
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| Sheila, you have expressed yourself so well in this, as these are words we all use from time to time. Deep, moving and beautifully written. |
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| Reviewed by Phillip William Allen |
4/5/2009 |
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| Deep thoughts penned with excellance. |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
4/5/2009 |
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| Creator's ways are mysterious,and we just have to wait until He's ready to tell us the answer. Excellent poem, Sheila!...ET |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
4/5/2009 |
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Sheila,
You've thoughtfully expressed ideas and questions that many of us will have wondered about at some time, what my grandparents used to call mysterious ways.
John |
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| Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury |
4/5/2009 |
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| Their are some many places that are taken for granted until they vanish. Enjoyed |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
4/5/2009 |
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We don't understand His reasonings now, but when we get to Heaven, His answers will then be revealed. All we can do now is hope and trust in Him until He comes back. Well done, Sheila; brava!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :( |
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| Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper |
4/5/2009 |
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| Your title is a phrase I've used a lot; yet, I've never given much thought to it until reading your poem. And you are so right, there are so many things in this world that we have no human answer for--and only God knows. Great write. |
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| Reviewed by Jon Willey |
4/5/2009 |
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| in God's overall scheme it is impossible for we mere mortals to comprehend the puzzle of how everything is supposed to fit together -- life alone leaves me in awe -- to ponder His decisions leaves me slack jawed -- peace and love -- Jon Michael |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
4/5/2009 |
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Excellent, Sheila, He has His reasons, although we don't understand ... well penned.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
4/5/2009 |
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so well expressed Shiela and a question I have been forced to ask myself more than once in my lifetime....
hugs
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
4/5/2009 |
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Indeed, Sheila. I have often wondered about the theme which you present in this thoughtfully written poem. Thank you. Love, hugs, and best wishes to you,
Regis |
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