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| Reviewed by Axilea Uzumcuoglu |
10/17/2009 |
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At first I wondered if I was going to like the subject you chose, but then I enjoyed the story-telling. I agree with Kate and I really like the fact that it reads like a ballad. Very well written.
Axilea |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
10/11/2009 |
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Sheila, I don't know how I missed this amazing poem. Wow, it really touched me to the bone. Great writing here.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V" |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
10/9/2009 |
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| exceptionally well written rhyme & intriguing subject matter, Shelia ... |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Wilson |
10/7/2009 |
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| Kate's right, Sheila...this is like a documentary...and the rhyme, perfect. This is excellent...well done! |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Price |
10/7/2009 |
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| Brilliant. Sheila at her best. Creepy, leaving one with an uneasy feeling to looking behind as goose flesh crawls up my back and turn into a shiver. Spooky. Love it. Liz |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
10/7/2009 |
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Sheila,
The Meg Moores of the world are the victims of cruelty and crime and of the indifference of society...and the search for closure goes on as much for our sakes as for the victim's. This is grim but not dark fantasy, your steady lines and steady head keep it real and meaningful.
Kate's right, you excel in this genre.
John |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
10/7/2009 |
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| MY GOOODNESS... THIS IS EXCELLENT... Sheila, you excel in this genre, and with such effortless rhyme. This form is perfect for your material - a lament and ballad all in one. I salute you for this... I'm not that partial to "dark" writes as such, but this is like a documentary which is living, rather than ghoulish for the sake of it. Again, kudos! :)) xx |
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| Reviewed by richard cederberg |
10/7/2009 |
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ahhh ... another cold case!
So many people get away with their heinous deeds.
You've created quite a compelling story/poem rich
with descriptions and imagery sheilafriend.
Done well, your gift shines ...
Blessings ... |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
10/7/2009 |
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Quite the tale Sheila. Nicely done. I feel sad for Meg. Love, peace, hugs, and best wishes to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
10/7/2009 |
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Powerfully penned, Sheila - well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Romantic Poetess Victoria L. McColley |
10/7/2009 |
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Dear Poetess! I really enjoyed reading this October offering, and it’s wonderful flow… & also I enjoyed my own recollections to men I have known who tried to wear “angels skin” (oh hummm……) little do they know our perceptions are much deeper than their waning deliveries of conception…poor poor Meg Moore though…she fell for his trap, where some of us just like to play….
with the depths of darkness as my shroud of hidden spies:
Sincerely Bound By Incantations,
Poetess Victoria...The Dark Pestilence of Romance
Archaic Mistress of Caliginous Temptations
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| Reviewed by Darryn Murphy |
10/7/2009 |
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| Nice poem, I like It |
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| Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper |
10/7/2009 |
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| Shelia, this is beautifully told. It sounds like a ballad. Great job and a wonderful, suspenseful read. |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
10/7/2009 |
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You had me hanging on every word in this one Meg er ah I mean Shiela, it was like you became this young girl and told the story through her eyes and voice. You captured the way a person, a family or a community react to such violent unnatural acts. Great write and definately submittable.
hugs
fee |
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