|Reviewed by Micha Julian
if it works
let me know...
i've given up....thought the little bugger didn't even EXIST!
I LOVE THIS!!!!
|Reviewed by richard poor
|add a night scope an you got me.....very good and unusual....|
|Reviewed by Calendula
|Dratt forgot to say......I love this, the words the rhyme the humour.|
|Reviewed by Calendula Petal
|Reviewed by the phantom pheonix
|Im running!!!!!!!! SO funny !!! I almost died with laughter!!|
|Reviewed by Sue Hess
|wonder what tom meant using my name and dum-dums in the same sentence? good poem|
|Reviewed by Oisín Breen
|Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci
LMAO! This is a great write! Glad you bought him a rifle, now maybe his aim will be stronger! Too Cute!
|Reviewed by Morchuis
Brilliant,Cupids little red dot should find the spot,with its new found laser technology,don't forget the ammo,
Dum Dum's make rather a mess. (Hess)
|Reviewed by James David Compton (Reader)
I love it.
Great pace to this.
Sometimes I think Cupid couldn't hit me at point-blank range.