|Reviewed by Sandra Corona
|Reviewed by A PAX
|LOL the fool on the hill had an ephifany!
lol love it!
|Reviewed by Evelyn Simon
|Oh my God! Mark! This was fabulous! It was like reading a nursery-
rhyme with an adult meaning. I "really" enjoyed it. Thanks for
|Reviewed by fare good
|It is a honor to call you brother as well as a king. Your wisdom is greater than gold are silver. Many use the word brother, through the eyes of a king the spirit shall light. The reflection of your soul speaks as the prophets that live on. Continue to teach my King.|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|A very wise tale that should be taken to heart by a lot of us. Thank you.|
|Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
|A awesome and so meaningful tale Mark!
This one definitely captivates and holds till the very end!
|Reviewed by L M (Reader)
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|terrific write, mark; well done! (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in burleson, karen lynn. :D|
|Reviewed by William Heffner
|Thanks for sharing Mark.
God Bless You and Your Loved ones
Your thankful friend
Officer William Heffner
|Reviewed by . ShyPoet1
|A very captivating tale ... extremely well written ...
Enjoyed the reading very much ...
|Reviewed by Robin Ouzman Hislop
|well iīm glad it had a happy ending not like those in life|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|What a pleasure to read this gifted write Mark! Thank you ! It's unique and wonderful,with a message of wisdom!|
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|Mark....Tale of wisdom my friend....excellent!!!!|
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|An excellent write ....Mark
enjoyed reading much
|Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)
|And a very profound tale you tell! Full of truth....a very strong write, Mark..... excellent...
|Reviewed by Robert Montesino
|A interesting & entertaining poem/story Mark! Enjoyed lots!|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|You've spun a wonderful tale, my friend. Enjoyed this very much.|
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|A very wonderful tale full of wisdom. Great write.|
|Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
|Very Good Mark! Soulful and the message is wonderful. Lisa|
|Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
|Excellent, Mark. I enjoyed this morality tale.