|
| Reviewed by Sandra Corona |
12/11/2003 |
|
Captivating! Bravo!
:)Sandy |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by A PAX |
11/24/2003 |
|
LOL the fool on the hill had an ephifany!
lol love it! |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Evelyn Simon |
11/21/2003 |
|
Oh my God! Mark! This was fabulous! It was like reading a nursery-
rhyme with an adult meaning. I "really" enjoyed it. Thanks for
sharing. |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by fare good |
11/8/2003 |
|
| It is a honor to call you brother as well as a king. Your wisdom is greater than gold are silver. Many use the word brother, through the eyes of a king the spirit shall light. The reflection of your soul speaks as the prophets that live on. Continue to teach my King. |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
11/7/2003 |
|
| A very wise tale that should be taken to heart by a lot of us. Thank you. |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader) |
11/7/2003 |
|
A awesome and so meaningful tale Mark!
This one definitely captivates and holds till the very end!
~Nikki~ |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by L M (Reader) |
11/7/2003 |
|
| Fantastic write. |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
11/7/2003 |
|
| terrific write, mark; well done! (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in burleson, karen lynn. :D |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by William Heffner |
11/7/2003 |
|
Thanks for sharing Mark.
God Bless You and Your Loved ones
Your thankful friend
Officer William Heffner |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by . ShyPoet1 |
11/7/2003 |
|
A very captivating tale ... extremely well written ...
Enjoyed the reading very much ... |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Robin Ouzman Hislop |
11/6/2003 |
|
| well i´m glad it had a happy ending not like those in life |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
11/6/2003 |
|
| What a pleasure to read this gifted write Mark! Thank you ! It's unique and wonderful,with a message of wisdom! |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya |
11/6/2003 |
|
| Mark....Tale of wisdom my friend....excellent!!!! |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
11/6/2003 |
|
An excellent write ....Mark
enjoyed reading much
William
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw) |
11/6/2003 |
|
And a very profound tale you tell! Full of truth....a very strong write, Mark..... excellent...
In Spirit,
Bear |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Robert Montesino |
11/6/2003 |
|
| A interesting & entertaining poem/story Mark! Enjoyed lots! |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
11/6/2003 |
|
| You've spun a wonderful tale, my friend. Enjoyed this very much. |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
11/6/2003 |
|
| A very wonderful tale full of wisdom. Great write. |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers |
11/6/2003 |
|
| Very Good Mark! Soulful and the message is wonderful. Lisa |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Leland Waldrip |
11/6/2003 |
|
Excellent, Mark. I enjoyed this morality tale.
Best regards,
Leland
|
|
|
|