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by Marilyn Seray

Saturday, August 28, 2004
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An elderly couple; enjoying their walk
Stop at a lamp shop- they whispered and talked

With so little strength- he opened the door
Ever the gentleman for the love he adores

They wave to each other with promise in their eyes
That she wouldnt be long and hed wait outside

He walked to a flower cart- picks posies then pays
He smiles and admires the beautiful array

He sits on a bench and from each little bloom
The air carried the light scent of the posies perfume

His eyes start to close- a smile softens his face
Hes dreaming of her and her beauty and grace

A tap jars him lightly- he wakes then he stands
And gives his love posies and kisses her hands

MS 08.28.04

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Reviewed by The Smoking Poet 8/10/2005
I have always had the greatest admiration for old love. While our society glorifies youth and the flush of romance, it is that which lasts , time tested, overcoming hurdles and obstacles, surviving the shadows we all have, that deserves the greatest respect. And a bunch of posies.
Reviewed by Dan Zuewski (Reader) 9/9/2004
This is a beautiful, quiet moment... expertly captured in verse ;)
Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain 8/31/2004

Wonderfully and beautifully composed - love the artwork!

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter 8/30/2004
This is an outstanding, masterful piece along with the art. While teaching I often took my students to Telfair Art Gallery and had them explain the paintings there. It's quiet interesting what they convey. Your poem is testimony to long lived love and done so very gently.
Reviewed by Theresa Koch 8/30/2004
Beautiful writing, your expression brought me there~`*
Reviewed by D May (Reader) 8/30/2004
Lovely, lovely write here.
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) 8/30/2004
Marilyn, this is so beautiful.
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 8/29/2004

this is exquisitely written, with a tender, loving heart (and pen)--exceptional!

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
Reviewed by Handsum Hart 8/29/2004
Soft and lovely, this is touching.
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 8/29/2004
This is heart touching and so very romantic!
Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) 8/29/2004
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 8/29/2004
This was so beautiful! A love like this should be treasured forever, outstanding!

Reviewed by William Bonilla 8/29/2004
Absoultely a beautiful piece
so masterfully presneted
wonderful imagery

William .....peace
Reviewed by Katy Walsvik 8/29/2004
I'm with Eileen, Marilyn... I could feel a physical reaction, warm, the kind of piece that brings a sigh. The writing is pure magic, the story, so moving. This is the one that will rise to the top after reading many. Beautiful. katy xox.
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 8/29/2004
Marvelous! And the graphic is marvelous, too.
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 8/29/2004
This is sooooooo beautiful Marilyn!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader) 8/28/2004
Awwwwwww this is just sooooo lovely....perfect in everyway.....ty, Dani
Reviewed by Lori Moore 8/28/2004
Perfect romance! Love it.
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) 8/28/2004
This is so wonderful it holds such excellent anticipation and expression.....

Reviewed by E T Waldron 8/28/2004
Marilyn this is gorgeous! I have tears in my eyes. Just when I thought nothing could move me tonight, you did!;-)
Thank you for this gem!love, Eileen

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