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| Reviewed by jude forese |
11/19/2005 |
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| cute, whimsical poem bursting with smiles ... |
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| Reviewed by Jane Rodway |
11/18/2005 |
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| :) This is a smile, happy dancy, jivey poem- love it. |
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| Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara |
11/17/2005 |
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Ok now that I am craving a bottle of 7-Up and a dance let me say Marilyn this is a crisp bubbly melodic and refreshing write you have here! I enjoyed this one!
~Nikki~ |
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| Reviewed by Dan Zuewski (Reader) |
11/16/2005 |
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yes! as refreshing as a cold glass of 7-Up, as someone said below... glad I stopped over here...
How are you Marilyn? I hope things are well with you and yours. ;) |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
11/16/2005 |
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To me, these bubbles are worlds. A delightful offering, Marilyn and thank you for sharing it. Love and peace to you.
Regis |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
11/14/2005 |
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| Your write is as refreshing as the drink itself. Good to see you back at the den. |
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| Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green |
11/9/2005 |
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| What fun! :) |
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| Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson |
11/9/2005 |
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I haven't drunk a 7-UP in so long
forget what it taste like
Great to read you sweetie....... |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
11/9/2005 |
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Delightful offering!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
11/9/2005 |
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Delightful write, Marilyn; sooo good to read you again! Where you been?? I have missed you!!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
11/9/2005 |
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dancing, dancing on seven up bubbles
feeling light and bouncy-
giddy from the fizz
Sounds marvelous, Marilyn - Fizz On! |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
11/9/2005 |
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wonderfully light poetry that cheers the heart and refreshes the mind, well done my friend.
Felix |
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| Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg |
11/8/2005 |
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| giddy...feels more like champagne |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
11/8/2005 |
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Marilyn, how good to read you!;-) This is delightful whimsy, and just what i need to start make my night off right! Love the bounce!
Dancing right beside you;-)
Love,
Eileen |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
11/8/2005 |
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Poor Bubbles. Had a cat called Bubbles.
High jumps low jumps.
A poet and poem full of vigour.
Glad you found your way back to the den of fun fun fun.. |
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
11/8/2005 |
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Hello! Nothing beats the fun of dancing on bubbles. Gosh! Much better than walking on water?
Have fun anyway! What a delightful lively piece to read!
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o) |
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