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| Reviewed by Theresa Koch |
3/20/2006 |
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| This was exquisite writing~`* |
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| Reviewed by Peter Paton |
3/12/2006 |
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An exceptionally divine romantic write Marilyn
The vision you had in the flickering flames was both passionate and spiritual....
Good to see you posting on the board again !
Your absence has been noted from the Den
Peter |
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| Reviewed by Janet Bellinger |
3/12/2006 |
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It brings back memories of all the flames in the past.
Janet |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
3/8/2006 |
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You have shared the moment most effectively through your verses, Marilyn. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by . ignis |
3/7/2006 |
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In a technical sense, it is not the flames. You could be gazing at anything and see what you saw; clouds, rustling leafs or a plastered wall. The unfocussing allows you to see the whole instead of the fragment. Our eyes have been conditioned to observe in ways that make us believe we see more, while in fact we see less. So in a more meaningful sense you saw those flames indeed.
RAge
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
3/7/2006 |
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Marilyn,
Hypnotic as the flames you paint in verse! Exquisite!!!!!!!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Only A Poet |
3/7/2006 |
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| it gets no better than this passionate picture of love and desire. |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
3/7/2006 |
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Such a beautiful moment-
And such a beautiful poem and graphic, Marilyn. |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
3/7/2006 |
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Lovely play that I can relate too,,,been playing with candles for weeks now!!
Funny what a poetic mind can come up with...even hot shower dreams just by watching those flame flicker and sway!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Susan de Vegter |
3/6/2006 |
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You left a burning impression visually and poetically.
Susan |
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| Reviewed by Linda Luna (Reader) |
3/6/2006 |
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Very nice. Glad to see you back. Thanks.
Linda |
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| Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson |
3/6/2006 |
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wonderful passion play with words...
Hi Marilyn...
Great to read you! |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
3/6/2006 |
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Marilyn WOW!!! I love it! A passionate captivating sensual poem, that really is unique! What a beautiful concept you crafted! Kudo's!
Good to see you my friend, you are missed!
Love,
Eileen |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
3/6/2006 |
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heart, soul and mind warming write. Good job.
Felix |
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| Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU |
3/6/2006 |
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A romantic-spiritual-libidinal aroma is taking the atmosphere in the
cosmos of "Flame Against Flame", where a scented live FLOWER of poetic grand shows its beauty.
I salute You, Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU |
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