|Reviewed by Amor Sabor
|I look back and see how you would tell a story with that crazed nearly haphazard flight that would take me away...I love being there|
|Reviewed by Debbie Lacy
|Beautiful and I love the pretty picture image as well! Again thanks for the share!
|Reviewed by Dale Clark
|So pretty and delightful. Enjoy your pen...
Thanks for sharing
|Reviewed by Sandie May Angel-Joyce
This is such a lovely write! I don't know why I hadn't seen this before.
Welcome back to AD!!!
Sandie Angel :o)
|Reviewed by Mariann Klimczuk
|Butterfly, an exceptional piece.
God Bless You,
|Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
When I am finished I
tickle its softness
with my delicate feet
to give a last call for
all to greet the sun .... l o v e i t. Butterflies are delightful,
and so is your colorful and slyly witty and succulent offering
to them. . (: and us :) 'Pea' <3
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|This has the lightness of a whisper, the beauty of a pageant and the finesse of a work of art as it moves effortlessly from stanza to stanza. I love the sense of innocence and yet sensuality, too. A lovely write, Marilyn, thank you. Kate x|
|Reviewed by m j hollingshead
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|I love to welcome the sun every morning I see it, or even a little rain once in a while. Lovely uplifting write Marilyn. Thanks always for your comments. Your a dear Lady.|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|a very beautiful, uplifting poem! rejuvenated my synapses...|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Music, image and wonderful orchestration of words all come together to form a piece of perfection. Thank you, Marilyn. Love and peace, Regis.|
|Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
|Augh sweet Miss Seray...I speak to the Monarchs and their voice comes back inside of your poetry. The poor Monarchs are surely doomed with the foretell of colder weather coming to their home south of the US. I read of this just yesterday. My heart is full with the flutter of their wings and the struggle they will endure. Your words are strength. Thank you.
|Reviewed by Rodd Jokre
|Lovely soft write dear... Please do more! ;0|
|Reviewed by Janet Caldwell
|Marilyn, this is surely the nicest poem that I've read tonight. BTW, I love your autumn colors on your bio-page. It really puts me in the mood for that harvest moon.
Love, Janet xoxoxo
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|Lovely imageries indeed!...and I love the butterfly in the picture.
Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)
|Reviewed by Vesna Vanessa
|“Wake up sleepy heads”
Indeed you have woken me up with this piece..wonderfully written ty
|Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
|Marilyn this is exceptional...I adore butterflys and have many flowers that draw them into my garden.....this was beautiful...floria|
|Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan
|Absolutely adorable, Marilyn.. Glad to see you back. (means pc is worling well again right?)
Glad info was useful..
|Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington
|This poem absolutely flutters on wings of delight!
|Reviewed by Katy Walsvik
|"a lighter kiss than us" Ahhhh, Marilyn, I floated right into this, left the room, soared! How could anyone not fly when reading this, a complete 'smile' of a poem. I'm a bit giddy.. feels wonderful! Thank you for this. katy.|
|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|Lovely and a good reminder not to take small things for granted. thanks GEM|
|Reviewed by Buddy Angel
|What a glorious write
|Reviewed by Digital Fairy
|M'lady Marilyn, this poem may well rival all others for soul touching beauty, in words and art!
Brilliant write :)
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|This was so lovely! I loved this wonderful poem so much,
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|Oh Marilyn, this is wonderful. So soft and descriptive, made me wish I could fly!|
|Reviewed by Christine Morell
|Whimsical, magical, enchanting and a delight to read. This is gorgeous, Marilyn.
|Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
|Sooooooooo beautiful Marilyn....you've a rare gift indeed.....ty, Dani|
|Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
|Truly a masterpiece.|
|Reviewed by Patrick Talty
I read this poem several times to delight again and again in the appreciation of its theme, your approach to the writing of it, and how the thought, feeling, verse form all join to form a singular richness of impact.
I don't know whether you intended the poem to be read on more than one level. For me, though, it DOES operate on the levels of the literal and the symbolic.
The free verse form is perfect for the work and, all in all, I would classify this as a poem of simple elegance which, like all good poetry, evokes thoughts, feelings and emotions similar (I imagine) to those which inspired it.
|Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster
|Marilyn...this is a lovely write - very whimsical and full of delight. ~Trish~|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Absolutley beautiful Marilyn!!
A pure delight!!
|Reviewed by Cherokee Sage (Reader)
|Every day is a beautiful day. Fine work.
|Reviewed by Cherokee Sage (Reader)
|Now this write was an absolute delight to read! Loved it! :)|
|Reviewed by Lori Moore
|Reviewed by Linda Murray
|Butterful romance, I just love it. A very unique concept. So romantic a kiss lighter than us.!!!|
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|Very outstanding sweet write...love n luck...BHUWAN|
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|Absolutley beautiful Marilyn
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Beautiful. I personally think if you aren't happy to see the sun come up each and every day, there is something seriously wrong with your life. Bravo on a fine work.|
|Reviewed by Shadow Writer (Reader)
|I can watch them forever, so beautiful and fragile, this was one terrific write that left me feeling good with memories of my own. Well done.|
|Reviewed by Jack Roberts
|I love butterflies! This is beautiful Marilyn.
|Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*®
|Wonderful imagery in this ... butterflies are amazing creatures!
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|This gives the reader the feeling of flight. Great write.|
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|So very lovely write! Enjoyed this indeed!
Sandie Angel :o) a.k.a. May Lu $*_*$
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|This whimsical magical write is pure delight,I love it, I feel renewed;-)Thank you Marilyn!|