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| Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader) |
1/22/2004 |
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| Awesome write...I love the verse about the moon...floria |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
1/21/2004 |
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| Emotively and meaningfully grasping. Thank you, Marilyn. Love and peace to you. Regis |
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| Reviewed by Ed Lupinacci (Reader) |
1/21/2004 |
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Dont worry about him i think he is Running on empty
great poem very powerful and Boy do you get the message out |
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| Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan |
1/20/2004 |
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Excellent imagery... enjoyed this immensely.
Jenni |
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| Reviewed by Trixie Love |
1/20/2004 |
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Wow Marilyn,
This is one powerful
write...
A feeling that most of
us had experienced through
life...
BRAVO!!!!
Hugs,
Trixie :) |
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| Reviewed by Christine Morell |
1/19/2004 |
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This is an incredible piece Marilyn.Beautifully and uniquely expressed.
~Chrissie |
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| Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw) |
1/19/2004 |
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I totally understand this, Marilyn! I gave up a race that I wasn't even running, and the crumbs ended! Love this analogy!
In Spirit,
Bear |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) |
1/19/2004 |
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| Oh how I understand this, outstanding poetry, breathtaking in its sharp image. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
1/19/2004 |
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| terrific stuff, marilyn; well done, my friend! enjoyed~ (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
1/19/2004 |
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| Seems like he's a bad listener or fool, this is spoken from a heart thats true, yet he has no clue, held on to every word in this poem, very well expressed.. |
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| Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) |
1/19/2004 |
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| What an ego I have, I saw the title and immediately, I thought this poem must be about my love making ability. Alas, it was not. |
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| Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader) |
1/18/2004 |
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| Great write! |
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| Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader) |
1/18/2004 |
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| Wow unique writing...What a great poem...telling it like it is.......and the pic is perfect.....ty, Dani |
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| Reviewed by Taylor Trenton (Reader) |
1/18/2004 |
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| WOW and OUCH this one is so good! |
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| Reviewed by Vicky Jeter |
1/18/2004 |
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Marylin, so good to see this post. Haven't caught up with you
in a while. I once deeply loved a man whom I would not have hurt for
the world--I learned over time that had he stayed in my intimate
proximity he would have been hurt regardless my approach.
Sometimes it's not about us, it's about them. Perhaps the hurt
is something he does not know how to heal within himself yet.
Much Love Vicky |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
1/18/2004 |
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Wonderfully expressed Marilyn!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson |
1/18/2004 |
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Sounds like Mr. Marathon Man is running from love
Great to read you Marilyn
Fabulous write.......
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
1/18/2004 |
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This was excellent! I loved this, so deeply moving, just wonderfully expressed!
Reindeer |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
1/18/2004 |
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| Marilyn,just WOW!!! Fantastic descriptions and images,I feel like you stole my one time, mantra, only of course you never heard it;-)This really says it all! |
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