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| Reviewed by Rodney Bohen |
8/17/2008 |
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"Then one day, I slowed to engage
the rhythm of my own heartbeat."
Lovely line.
Outstanding piece.
The word dose bothered me a bit somehow, it seemed a plain word to suit the eloquence words prior couched in such grace.
Yet, still outstanding.
Sincerely
Rodney |
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| Reviewed by Tony Jenkins |
7/20/2008 |
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Slow down, get to know your self.
There's the rarest gem of of all.
You.
Thank you for a beautiful poem.
Tony |
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| Reviewed by Lois Christensen |
7/2/2008 |
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| God is great, God is good, all the time, a song the children sing at our Church. They love this song. It's so true. |
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| Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader) |
4/24/2008 |
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| Absolutley beautiful! Blessings, Holly |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
4/21/2008 |
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And may it continue on through eternity because there is nothing greater.....
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Jennifer Butler |
4/21/2008 |
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I have seen his face, but others never say the same. I suppose I must give more, as they say, those who have more should give more. I am blessed. |
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| Reviewed by Randall Barfield |
4/20/2008 |
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| Nice words, feelings. |
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| Reviewed by Deborah Munson (Reader) |
4/20/2008 |
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| Absolutely refreshing and wonderful write to know I'm not the only one! Cheers, Deborah |
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