|Reviewed by Leann Marshall
|I have to laugh, because I've been there--alone at night surounded by my own unlovely thoughts while others sleep, my body not cooperating. Love it!|
|Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
Hope it's only once, this bad!
Great write Silver1
WArm hugs and Inner Peace! Warrior Lady Sheeeoox
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|Oh dear, this was so excellent, and oh yes, can I relate, ha ha. wonderful.
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Reviewed by email@example.com Bennett
|IT HAS BEEN A PLEASURE TO READ SUCH FINE WORK|
|Reviewed by richard cederberg
Hate those moments of swelling, bubbling, gurgling, burping, regurgitant releases of methane. Especially when it clears the room and you don't want to take the blame.
Foul gas is certainly one of the banes of our humanness.
Love the picture, so apt!
|Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic
|LOL:.been there DONE that!!!
Superb pice about something sooo uncomfortable..
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Coffee is my weakness too! Hope you felt better shortly after writing this. Love the photo! phew yu!|
|Reviewed by Sherry Heim
|Been there, Silver. I don't have acid reflux all the time but if I eat heavy carbs in the evening I am guaranteed to be waking up with that painful burn and uncomfortable bloat. I am sorry for your sleeplessness but from the depths of discomfort you have birthed a fantastic poem...graphic says it all!!
|Reviewed by Gordon Rosenberg
|the picture is priceless|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Well, that's one way to vent I suppose. The photo nicely complements your verses. Thanks for the smiles. Love and peace (and relief),
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Should have came and talked to me I sat up till two working on some projects hoping someone would pop in on MSN or Yahoo to chat, alas no one did. good write and both subjects you covered in it I can relate to.
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|But, I drink lots of diet soda and coffee and tea...
and that is why I am up tonight talking with just me.
I skip the pop, but the coffee and tea keep me up many a night! And I love that photo.
|Reviewed by Chrissy McVay
|I think most of us know this feeling to some degree... Cute picture! That'll teach kitty to follow too close.|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Hahahahaha....been there done that....pheeeeeew!!
Love Tinka :)
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|I had those moments when the gas filled my stomach and wouldn't come out. I tossed and turned and I couldn't get to sleep, because it gave me great pain.
It seems fun when I read your poem, but I know the true feeling. I'm so glad you can at least write this out. Hope you are feeling better already.
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
Very funny picture!! *Laffin' too hard to review*
|Reviewed by Divinity 11
|hahaha awesome...been to long since I heard from you