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| Reviewed by E. Richardson |
2/25/2011 |
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| This is such a moving piece, Sheri. There is sadness and a glimpse of what might have been... |
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| Reviewed by C. Borris (Reader) |
11/2/2010 |
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Sheri, this is so hauntingly beautiful!
Cynthia |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
9/15/2010 |
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This theme is familiar to me and speaks to my heart, Sheri. Coincidentally, I also have a poem posted here at AD entitled, "Destiny." Love and peace to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Paul Judges |
6/25/2010 |
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| Very nicely achieved, Sheri |
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| Reviewed by Michelle Mead |
6/24/2010 |
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| The perfect simplicity of these spare lines belies the depth of meaning packed within its well-chosen words. |
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| Reviewed by Emile Tubiana |
6/22/2010 |
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| Dear Sheri, This is a very sad and moving riddle. I hope that the tide will bring a happy change which will be better than anything you can imagine. I pray for that. Love Emile |
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| Reviewed by TONY NERONE |
6/22/2010 |
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Lovely written piece.
GOD BLESS YOU
TONY |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Anderson |
6/21/2010 |
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| A beautiful and truly moving piece, Sheri. |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
6/21/2010 |
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Poignant and very moving, Sheri.
John |
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| Reviewed by M. Rafferty |
6/21/2010 |
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Sheri, your words flow gently filled such emotion that won't fail to touch the hearts of the reader. Well done!
matt |
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| Reviewed by T. Schwimmer |
6/21/2010 |
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Oh, Sheri this is so heartfelt. I can feel the anguish in every line. Maybe it's OK to befriend destiny and ask to please take you back somewhere in time where you wanna be...
Love,
Tanya |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
6/21/2010 |
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Oh Sheri, This pulls at the heartstrings, it is an unexplainable feeling what it is like to not be able to be in a little ones life..I am not sure of the cirucumstance, but feel the ache.
love and big hug,
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
6/21/2010 |
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Destiny...to every one and each of us it has a different form, time and color, and if we listen good...the sound of a promise.
Georg
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
6/21/2010 |
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Beautifully, achingly penned -- and felt! Well done, Sheri.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by D Johnson |
6/21/2010 |
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Nicely penned, Sheri, the stuff that is straight from the heart.
Cheers,
Dan |
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| Reviewed by Andrew Grover |
6/21/2010 |
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A fine piece of poetry, Sheri. Beautifully written, as usual.
AJ |
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| Reviewed by Regino Gonzales, Jr. |
6/21/2010 |
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| There's sadness in the beautiful verses. Sadness is probably the last freedom in this difficult world. It heals the soul. |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
6/21/2010 |
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Sheri, this is so heart touching and beautiful poetry! Thank you for sharing your beautiful soul with us.
Much peace, love and light,
Amber "V" |
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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
6/21/2010 |
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Filled with a deep sense of longing...this touched my heart, Sheri! I am a grandmother and I can't imagine not being there for my precious little grandson! I love him to distraction!!! A poem is truly well penned when it touches another's heart......well done!
Anna |
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