|Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)
|am energized and ready to reach up to the next level that you are wont to define
as I see your eyes smile
And feeling your body succumb to my command I ask you this time
Does it work for you.
This is extremely sweet my dear friend. anybody receiving this kind of message must see himself very honored and proud. Your friend Abdi-Noor
|Reviewed by Alain Gracio
|A lover's discovery is a delicate zone between the erotic and the erogenous! Simply put its the mastery of conquering the physical neccesity and output of the male's ultimate goal. Yes I enjoyed this poem immensely
|Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU
This is a deep depicting of togetherness by the will of
thedesigner... "A Loverr's Discovery" says it full.
the closing lines are masterful:
"Loving me works because it was my plan
I designed this to perfection for us alone
And it is the one that you now recognize."
I enjoyed reading "A Loverr's Discovery".
Healthy Creative Life, Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU