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| Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) |
9/13/2004 |
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Lori, Smiles read bio love it and congrates YIPEE!!!!!!!
I always love reading your haiku....
LP |
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| Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader) |
9/12/2004 |
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| Great haiku's Lori. |
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| Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang |
9/12/2004 |
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Lori,
I saved this one to my library!
Most outstanding work! I hear you
are surpassing yourself!(grin)
Love ya!
Becca |
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| Reviewed by D May (Reader) |
9/12/2004 |
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I love these and I am impressed at how you can do these so well.
"her death
rose buds open-
orphan petals fall"
Priceless!
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
9/12/2004 |
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| Something about each of the first four "sticks" like the tiny little thorns of the fifth! A wonderful collection yet again! TY Kate xx |
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| Reviewed by Katryn Dougherty |
9/12/2004 |
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| first and third are my favorites :) |
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| Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) |
9/11/2004 |
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| I just can't figure how it is you do these so well. |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
9/11/2004 |
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Lori I didn't think you could improve on your past haiku!
Kudo's! these are beyond the pale! |
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| Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen |
9/11/2004 |
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| Beautiful, Lori. Powerfully moving. |
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| Reviewed by Peter Paton |
9/11/2004 |
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Wow..Lori
Love them all
You have surpassed yourself...
Peter |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
9/11/2004 |
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| it's not easy to put an entire idea into 5-7-5 but yours are always inspired and successful at achieving so ... |
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| Reviewed by Phillip William Allen |
9/11/2004 |
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| I'll take #5, lot of thought in just 3 lines |
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| Reviewed by Handsum Hart |
9/11/2004 |
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In agreement with Kate here, number four is the winner.
Night skies and starlight
HH |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
9/11/2004 |
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Love this!!
"in the distance-
sky and ocean blues blend
parallel attraction "
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
9/11/2004 |
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This was my favorite one out of the five;
"her death
rose buds open-
orphan petals fall" |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
9/11/2004 |
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(((lori)))
these soar with vivid imagination--BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :) |
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