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5 Ru and Ku
by Lori L Moore
Wednesday, August 26, 2009
Rated "G" by the Author.

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climbing the shadow

of Mount Fuji-

why applaud

 

a parrot

mocking a canary-

karaoke

 

he calls it dancing-

two left feet

upon my own

 

the tan line

on his finger-

beware of dogs

 

raindrops ripple

then disappear-

excuses

 




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Reviewed by Annabel Sheila 9/9/2009
I am such a big fan of your ku's...these are brilliant!!! You are so very talented, my friend. Keep 'em coming!!

Hugs,
Anna
Reviewed by Ronald Hull 9/3/2009
I do not ru the way you stir the ru. Only you can make a parrot hilarious.

Ron
Reviewed by Patrick Granfors 8/29/2009
Liked them all but I like #4 the best. But you shouldn't defame dogs, they have some integrity, well except Mr Weter who barfed all over the living room last night. Patrick
Reviewed by Peter Schlosser 8/29/2009
I once took a ball-room dance class about 10 years ago. I was about as graceful as a plane crash. Your two left feet stanza speaks volumes to me in a PTSD sort of way:-) Nice work Lori.
Reviewed by richard cederberg 8/29/2009
These are conceptualized well.
The first strikes me as a painting
Blessings ...
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 8/29/2009
Meaningful haiku, Lori. I love them all. Love and best wishes,

Regis
Reviewed by Jerry Diamond 8/28/2009
I like the way you mix up your words in a a meaningful medley
You take me there !
This is cool * he calls it dancing-

two left feet

upon my own* Ha Ha

Jerry
Reviewed by Kate Burnside 8/28/2009
great line up, but paticularly the parrot and the dancing do it for me! Very strong images conjured in each of them, though. xx
Reviewed by Joyce Bell 8/28/2009
...DAYDREAMS, NATURE, REALITY....TAKING QUICK PICTURES OF LIFE LIKE YOU DO SO NICELY. THANKS FOR SHARING AND GOD BLESS.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Reviewed by Gene Williamson 8/27/2009
Lori, your talent is inexhaustible. I can't decide on a favorite;
I like them all. Thanks. -gene.
Reviewed by Christine Alwin 8/27/2009
..my favorite it the last one..they are all great,,,you sure have a nac for this :)
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 8/27/2009
Exquisite, Lori - the first one a showstopper - deeply thought provoking - and had to laugh at the parroting parrot. =] Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Felix Perry 8/27/2009
love all of these and would be hard pressed to pick a fav...

hugs
fee
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 8/27/2009
I must agree with others, the parrot-canary, is my favorite.
Reviewed by Sherry Heim 8/27/2009
Your Ku are always excellent and always entertaining. I loved the parrot and canary, how clever you are, Lori.
Take care,
Sherry
Reviewed by John Flanagan 8/27/2009
Lori,
You've done it again! This time I have a favourite, the parrot and the canary...so clever and funny.

John
Reviewed by Paul D Berube 8/26/2009
Well done, Lori.
Reviewed by E T Waldron 8/26/2009
with few words You get a myriad pf meaning into your Ku&ru Lori!
Unique and clever!
Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK 8/26/2009
Humanity Is Made Up Of EXCUSES,i.e.Includes My Intellectual Lair Son!

Lori You Have Unique Twist Of Words Most Can't Comprehend!

TRASK
Reviewed by Dallas D'Angelo-Gary 8/26/2009
Love them all, deep with their own meaning. I especially like the lst one.
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