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by Lori L Moore
Thursday, September 10, 2009
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A little social commentary.

A war to end instability-

No war for any reason-

This is what the people want.


Womb to the tomb including free room-

Independence to make my way and keep my pay-

This is what the people want.


A European sensitivity-

American born in the land of the free-

This is what the people want.


We the polarized people, in order to form our personal brand of union,

assure single minded hegemony, and ignore personal responsibility,

do ordain this disharmonized society

until it destroys itself and consumes our posterity.

To accomplish this means, we cling to righteous disagreements,

knowing that ours is the true position of the people.




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Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader) 9/14/2009
i seem to remember a different preamble when i was a kid learning about the constitution. somebody, somewhere changed something, i know it. i'm sharp like that.
Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper 9/14/2009
a lot of this society is polarized on negative Lori, neg and bullzit, great versing, cheers
Reviewed by Ronald Hull 9/13/2009
The truth always prevails... sometimes, post mortem. The righteous seem to forget that it was the policies they hold to that got us to this mess. They have no take with scientific reason and thus slow human progress and cause and exacerbate crises.

Galileo was a heretic. Gandhi was a rabble-rouser. Pasteur was an alchemist.

Reviewed by Gene Williamson 9/12/2009
I guess we needed this, Lori (and you do it so well). What do you
think of the idea of everybody in the good old USA gathering around the Washington Monument for a hug-in? -gene.
Reviewed by Patrick Granfors 9/11/2009
I knew I'd logged out too soon and had to check back in. People need to get off their dead asses and take care of their personal responsibilities starting with their lazy ass kids who can't manage to complete a "free" public education and instead belly up the public trough after the 8th grade after the birth of their 2nd child whose father is in jail for stealing cars trying to help dad who'd screwed the system by buying 22 homes on "stated credit" hoping to flip them for obscene profit only to find a dead market propagated by greedy bankers and crooked politicians who were convinced a burger flipper at MacDonalds making 6 bucks an hour could afford a $300,000 home. Woof.
Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK 9/11/2009

Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks 9/11/2009
"A little social commentary"...with a whole lot of truths on the matter. Well thought out and written, Lori!!
I think too many recent wars have ne'r destroyed our senitivity of and responsibility for good, common sense.
Blessings and Love - Micke
Reviewed by Dixie Dawn Michelle 9/11/2009
Propaganda of false freedom, false rights and patriotism are leading people to be indifferent to the Constitition. The disrespect to the Constitution and its violation is evident everywhere in USA.

"Polarized" rings the bells of social responsibility.

Thank you for sharing your thoughts in poetic expressions.

In appreciation,

Dixie Dawn Michelle
Reviewed by Dallas D'Angelo-Gary 9/11/2009
It's the cycle of ruling nations all over again. Ascent to power, a time of properity, and then a falling away. Collapse is usually from internal rot. Well done, Lori.
Reviewed by Mark Sebring 9/11/2009
"Singin' songs and carryin' signs. Mostly say, 'Hooray for our side!'"

Has our country ever been as polarized as it is today? It's hard to say. Stephen Stills wrote those words in the mid-1960's when our country was divided over the war in Viet Nam. And what about 100 years before that when the issue was slavery. Has it always been this way?

Your poem is very well written and very relevant, intelligently analyzing a problem that touches all of our lives and will have a great deal of impact on our future.
Reviewed by Sherry Heim 9/11/2009
Words too true to be settling. We each need to understand that freedom is lost when someone else is providing us with everything. Gusee what, they will believe that they own us and essentially we are granting them the right to control our lives on every level. If we want to be free, we must be responsible for ourselves and take charge of our lives.
Take care,
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) 9/11/2009
Nero is fiddlin'
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart 9/11/2009
Individuality is given by God and should be guarded by each individual. Thought provoking pen.
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 9/11/2009
do ordain this disharmonized society
until it destroys itself and consumes our posterity

It so sadly seems that way today, and I think it will only get worse.

Reviewed by Louisa Dobbins 9/11/2009
Is a more perfect union wishful thinking? I have a few more years left, I hope so.
Reviewed by Annabel Sheila 9/11/2009
Sorry state of affairs, but oh so true! Powerful write, Lori!

Reviewed by Richard Arrington 9/11/2009
Lori, from the north to the south-Polarized and thanks for the thaw.
Reviewed by John Flanagan 9/11/2009
Powerful writing, Lori.

Reviewed by Felix Perry 9/11/2009
Strong and rightous statement that captures the instable politically correct culture that we have evolved into.

Reviewed by JMS Bell 9/10/2009
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 9/10/2009
P O W: right between the eyes! Oh, Lori. This is powerfully provocative and SO spot on! We are quickly becoming (if we haven't already arrived) the DIVIDED States of America. BRAVA! for penning such a knockout!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

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