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| Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson |
9/17/2009 |
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| I think we all get lost at times in our life and search for elusive if's and dreams....M |
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| Reviewed by Dallas D'Angelo-Gary |
9/16/2009 |
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| Reading a book by another can immerse one into a surreal world of fantasy and fiction, virtue and venom. Love that pairing. Wel done, Lori. |
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| Reviewed by Patrick Granfors |
9/15/2009 |
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| Alas the chapters of life are each fickle and fleeting. Masterfully done Lori. Patrick |
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| Reviewed by Ankin Timourian |
9/14/2009 |
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The book of life is fool of beautiful dreams, innocence and hopes and sometimes dreams get shattered too...so sad and tru and nothing we can do...
Beautiful poem,
Love Ankin |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge |
9/14/2009 |
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| Stunning, sometimes I want to know the ending of the book but then again, I don't. |
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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
9/14/2009 |
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Lovely! Your word crafting is amazing! Enjoyed every single line.
Anna |
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| Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle |
9/14/2009 |
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Great poem Lori,I enjoy reading it,take care
EDWIN |
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| Reviewed by OnepoetGem * |
9/14/2009 |
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| good one Lori, word by word, cheers |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
9/13/2009 |
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ONE NEVER KNOWS..OFTEN...OUT OF THE ASHES...COMES BEAUTY. VERY GOOD WRITE THAT IS WELL DONE. THANKS FOR SHARING AND GOD BLESS.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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| Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK |
9/13/2009 |
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Excellent...
TRASK |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
9/13/2009 |
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| superb descriptive poem about book reading night after night,as we who read dai;y know you captured it to perfection,Lori! |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
9/13/2009 |
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Sounds like you were lost in Lilies of the Field. But found poetic voice.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
9/13/2009 |
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Lori this is very strong and with such emotion that the room goes quiet and still to hear all you have to say...well done.
hugs
fee |
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| Reviewed by Sherry Heim |
9/13/2009 |
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Life is, indeed, like a book unfolding. Unfortunately, these days, I am watching my lifelong imaginings of freedom, rights and a voice amid the masses melting away. My Country is slipping into darkness under the guises of change and hope. In fact, the changes are destroying the hope that has kept us strong as our leaders make choices for us without the ability for our voice to be heard or our votes to be cast. Was it always but a dream that this country was "Of, by and for the people?" This is an outstanding poem, Lori, layered and with a depth of perception that must be perceived by all if we are to survive and continue in greatness.
Take care,
Sherry |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
9/13/2009 |
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Great offering Lori!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Robert Jude(Ace) Forese |
9/13/2009 |
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| conceptually bright and creatively crafted ... |
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| Reviewed by gaurishankar chemudupati |
9/13/2009 |
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the beauty of the lily
withered beneath the sun- page by page
a dream no longer valid." Life is like book with revealed events page after page.The dream of life is seen in the book page by page.As the dream fades away the life ends like a lily that whithers away. Beautiful poem dear Lori!
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton |
9/13/2009 |
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| Very nice arrangement of words, Lori. A catalyst for the lost and weary I'm afraid. When dreams are shattered life begins to spin out of control in its hum-drum existence as it waits for the end. |
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| Reviewed by Louisa Dobbins |
9/13/2009 |
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Awesome...keep writing
Louisa |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
9/13/2009 |
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| ...between the pages indeed...great work Lori..so much said to ponder |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
9/13/2009 |
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This one poignant - pages of a life of regret? What I read in these lines - very well penned, Lori.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
9/13/2009 |
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| Quite powerful, Lori. |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
9/13/2009 |
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Lori,
Deep and superior evaluation of the facets of imagination, their range and possibilities expressed in excellently wrought images...and the third and final disturbing and challenging for this reader. Fine work.
John |
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