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Life's Anthology
by Lori L Moore
Tuesday, September 15, 2009
Rated "G" by the Author.
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This is my attempt at Byron meets Poe... a little more Poe than Byron. Oh well.

It wasn’t Byron’s starry skies

or Edgar’s Annabel Lee,

but I read a poem ‘neath the midnight sun

that spoke of you and me.

 

It relished love, when love was young

and honored chivalry,

that poem I read ‘neath the midnight sun

that spoke of you and me.

 

But then alas, true winds blew strong

on life’s anthology,

and darkened clouds blocked the starry skies

that had honored you and me-

then Edgar fled and Byron died

and the starry skies became a lie

while the poem I read ‘neath the midnight sun

was replaced by reality-

that beautiful poem, ‘neath the midnight sun

was replaced with you and me.

 

 

 

 

 



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Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
good one Lori, like your style, cheers
Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Love the music, Lori. It was a joy to dance along with you
(and Poe and Byron) on this one. Never missed a beat. -gene.
Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
The meter and rhyme in this is just wonderful.
Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo
Sometimes reality can be quite cruel. This was very well written! ~Elizabeth
Reviewed by E T Waldron
I'm so impressed with the melodious rhythm and rhyme to this beauty ,Lori! you truly capture the authors you've chosen! Kudo's!
Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks
Very well written, Lori. I so enjoy the meter of Poe's poetry, and this followed Annabel Lee perfectly!
Blessings and Love - Micke
Reviewed by William Bonilla
Well penned Lori
enjoyed much
Love & peace

William
Reviewed by jude forese
superbly crafted ... a joy to read ...
Reviewed by Ronald Hull
So much irony in this one it almost rusted--enjoyed immensely.

Ron
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Excellent writing sweet lady...enjoyed very much...stay safe and well..Hugsss
Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson
Exceptional poem. It draws the reader in and holds them there.....M
Reviewed by Barbara Terry
This is really true Lori. But there is nothing wrong in dreaming. I could see the stars in your eyes as you reminisced, and then the disappoitment when the clouds covered the stars. A wonderful write and I could actually see what you wrote through the images you painted here. Thank you for sharing sis.

Also thank you for your comments on my new poem. And yes I was happy when I wrote it because I felt a great weight lifted off of me. Thank you.

May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and who love you, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie.
Reviewed by Ankin Timourian
Aren't we all bounce back and forth between dreems and reality...?
Great imagery, so well done.
Love Ankin
Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Romantic You True...

TRASK...
Reviewed by JMS Bell
WELL DONE...WHEN IMAGINATION IS FILLED WITH BEAUTIFUL THOUGHTS AND THEY BECOME REAL....WHAT MORE COULD ONE ASK FOR?
JOYCE - HIS INSPIRATIONS
Reviewed by Dallas D'Angelo-Gary
An ugly turn toward reality. Nice twist, Lori, I hope you were able to recreate the cast of characters.
Reviewed by David Younger
Fantastic verse! I found myself drawn in to the story instantly and wished it continued on! Very nicely written. Thank you!
Reviewed by richard cederberg
"To withdraw myself from myself has
ever been my sole, my entire, my sincere
motive in scribbling at all." Byron...
I sense, in your work, that you always
strive to be the best you can be.
Reviewed by Felix Perry
Great write and great flow, I can actually and was actually picturing this as song lyrics for the rythem is wonderful. enjoyed this one a lot Lori...
hugs
fee
Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Nicely done. Poe is one of my favorites. Sounds just like the Annabel Lee poem
Reviewed by Dale Clark
Very nice, Lori, you've captured it.
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Lori,

My new favorite of yours - instantly hooked by meter and rhyme - reads like a classic. BRAVA! Take a bow - well deserved!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Great job Lori!


Anna
Reviewed by Mr. Ed
A marvelous attempt, and a powerful poem.
Reviewed by Sherry Heim
The transition from joyful imaginings into reality is a bristly one to say the least. You do an excellent job of instilling both spaces and feelings into the reader. Excellent poem, Lori.
Take care,
Sherry
Reviewed by Louisa Dobbins
Publish as much as you can dear Lori!
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Like what John said about your write. I'll let that stand. Nice. Very.
Reviewed by John Flanagan
Lori,
More Poe, for sure, but definitely you...and stylistically excellent; that bump back to earth is painful but very real and you don't try to gloss over it. I love this poem.

John
Reviewed by Paul Berube
Beautifully written, Lori.
Reviewed by George Carroll
Nicely done Lori.
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