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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
10/23/2009 |
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Clever and meaningful verses, Lori. Thank you for sharing them. Love and best wishes,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Roger Ochs |
10/21/2009 |
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Why am I reminded of the W.C. Fields line, "It was a woman who drove me to drink and I forgot to thank her."
Your wonderful sense of whimsy allows you to make grave points without preaching. |
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| Reviewed by OnepoetGem * |
10/21/2009 |
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| good one Lori, sometimes I feel everyone uses the devil for an excuse also, I never seen a devil anyway but I have seen plenty of mean azz humans, worse than devils, cheers |
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| Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper |
10/19/2009 |
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| This is spicy, sassy, and cute. You're just paying homage to the devil. <grin> |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge |
10/19/2009 |
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| Remember Flip Wilson? A thought provoking pen Lori. |
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| Reviewed by Patrick Granfors |
10/18/2009 |
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| It's always a sin to kick your dog. The spouse? Well maybe he had it coming. The theme? Perfectly tuned to the Sunday righteous. Well done. Patrick |
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
10/18/2009 |
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The devil simply
Is a sorry excuse
for all the wrong
I daily choose.
Yes, Lori, the only "he" is me...and thee.
-gene. |
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| Reviewed by Richard Orey |
10/18/2009 |
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A delightful little diddy about our pervasive social cop-outs.
I love it!
Richard |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
10/18/2009 |
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And he made me do it, again...
Light, but wise.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Ankin Timourian |
10/17/2009 |
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| Very interesting, Lori. I liked reading it. |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
10/17/2009 |
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people must accept the consequences and of their own actions ... no one else is responsible ...
clever & well written, Lori ... |
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| Reviewed by Peter Schlosser |
10/17/2009 |
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| It's what I call "drive-by religion." You act like an a**hole all week long, then pop into the confessional booth on Sunday to get "clean again", then it's back out into the world carrying on like a complete wanker taking no responsibility for your own actions. Great snide little slap in the face poem to those who do this. |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
10/17/2009 |
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Lori,
This is more than clever and witty, it pricks and stabs and jolts. Yes!
John |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
10/17/2009 |
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HOW RIGHT YOU ARE...WHEN ONE IS AWARE OF THE FACT THAT THEY ARE HURTING OTHERS AND BUT DOESN'T TRY TO DO SOMETHING ABOUT IT... INSTEAD...FINDS EXCUSES FOR NEGATIVE ACTIONS, THEN THEY REALLY ARE 'CHOOSING' NOT TO CHANGE. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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| Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK |
10/17/2009 |
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Satan Devil Has Many Faces,i.e. He Can Be Your Smiling Pervert Neighbor,Cop,Doctor,Mailman,Evil Kid Next Door Even Your Dog N Cat..
So You Wrote TRUTH...
TRASK... |
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| Reviewed by Carol Grace |
10/17/2009 |
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| I love the line, I'm lip service sorry--great stuff. Carol |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
10/17/2009 |
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| How right you are Lori! Very clever,playful write! |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
10/17/2009 |
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So right you are, when people use religion and these sad excused for a lack of humanity it makes me sick, forgive and turn the other cheek...not in this lifetime, make em pay.
feee |
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| Reviewed by Bennett Kremen |
10/17/2009 |
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| You're doing a worthy service, Lori, putting responsibility back into the hands where they belong. |
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| Reviewed by Sherry Heim |
10/17/2009 |
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Don't you just hate those people who take no responsibility for their actions or their fate? Well stated.
Take care,
Sherry |
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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
10/17/2009 |
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Very cleverly penned, Lori...love the rythmic flow. The last verse is awesome! We're always blaming someone else! giggle
Anna |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Diamond |
10/17/2009 |
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Yep Lori
I reckon there is a devil in each and every one of us, and we must always be extra vigilant to keep him chained up where he belongs.
I liked the symbiosim with you and the dog and spouse.
Jerry |
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| Reviewed by m j hollingshead |
10/17/2009 |
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| well done |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton |
10/17/2009 |
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| Yes, it is a serious topic, Lori, and I don't think it was all that playful / You took the subject and gave us illustrations of it in a compact and dynamic way / That you began to see you in the dog and the spouse is heavy-duty seriousness . . . |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
10/17/2009 |
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| A very sorry excuse, indeed. |
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| Reviewed by John Domino |
10/17/2009 |
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Excellent Lori!
You put on paper what many of us do and feel.
Without "Divine Guidance" we are all lost on a spinning wheel.
Blessings,
JMD |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
10/17/2009 |
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Thought provoking, Lori - agree with Paul. If Jesus is love, the devil is the exact opposite, who tempts us to act ugly - and we, being human, usually follow in his footsteps. JMO, FWIW ... well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Paul D Berube |
10/17/2009 |
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| Well said, Lori. But truly, it "IS" the devil's handiwork. Stand tough, pray and may God bless you my friend. |
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