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| Reviewed by Amor Sabor |
11/4/2010 |
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| Well done as usual. It has been awhile has it not? |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
4/17/2010 |
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It's not Halloween but your creative expression is just as effective and enjoyable, Lori. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Janet Caldwell |
3/23/2010 |
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| Wow! Last stanza stirs dark images. Love it beautiful lady! x |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
10/31/2009 |
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VERY GOOD IMAGERY...WELL DONE. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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| Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper |
10/31/2009 |
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| deep halloween Lori, maybe she should have stuck with candy, treats |
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| Reviewed by Dallas D'Angelo-Gary |
10/29/2009 |
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| Wonderfully done, Lori. |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
10/28/2009 |
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| The first three fill me with the warm fuzzies, Lori, in the sense that I feel they address the exuberance of childhood innocence "behind the freakin mask!"... but my goodness, the counterpoint of the fist in the velvet glove of the fourth! The stark reality of life that is a living hell for some. Yes, this holiday is largely taken in fun, but can we be surprised if there's an upsurge in grievous bodily violence on the back of it? We jollify, glorify and act out gore then condemn the real thing... seems crazy to me... But I'll not be the spectre at the feast! Great Ku as always. thanks, Kate xx |
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| Reviewed by Roger Ochs |
10/27/2009 |
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| Clever and amusing. well done. |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
10/26/2009 |
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| clever, fantastic Halloween ku,Lori! Loved all, but especially the last one;-) |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
10/26/2009 |
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Gorgeous renderings, Lori; the final one has a dark resonance and the intended pun makes it more so.
These are great.
John |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
10/26/2009 |
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"Sweetly cute." he said, his breath heavy with chocolately hallow-tosis.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
10/26/2009 |
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Strong diversity from sweet innocence to brutal reality...wow
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
10/26/2009 |
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Smiled at the first three, BAM, hit by the fourth - powerfully penned sadness. :( Well done, Lori.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
10/26/2009 |
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| Love these, Lori. Saddened by #4. -gene. |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart |
10/26/2009 |
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| Oh my what a twist at the end!! Well penned and enjoyed Lori. |
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| Reviewed by Bennett Kremen |
10/26/2009 |
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| The last one's a bruiser. |
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| Reviewed by Patrick Granfors |
10/26/2009 |
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| Very entertaining...as Kuul as they come. I read the last two stanzas two different ways and prefer to look at it like Jerry and his red light district sense of humor. The other way puts a bit of a damper on of sadness on it all. Tie goes to the reader.Patrick |
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| Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader) |
10/26/2009 |
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| Damn, that's a clever one! Good stuff. |
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| Reviewed by D Johnson |
10/26/2009 |
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What a creative way to keep the eyes reading until the end.
Cheers,
Dan |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
10/26/2009 |
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| Hah! The last one / Gotta love it . . . |
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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
10/26/2009 |
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Absolutely loved them all!!! Your ku's are wonderful, Lori. Write on!!
Anna |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
10/26/2009 |
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| ..each one is as good as the next! |
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| Reviewed by Sherry Heim |
10/26/2009 |
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Each one is so clever, Lori, I loved them all. I love Halloween and I also love writing Halloween poems. I guess it is time to start thinking about doing that.
Take care,
Sherry |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
10/26/2009 |
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| Love the first one, and the last one is quite sad. |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
10/25/2009 |
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| Each one a treat |
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