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Halloween Ku
by Lori L Moore

Sunday, October 25, 2009
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Halloween

the vampire settles

for a Hershey’s kiss

 

November 1st-

candy wrappers

roam the streets

 

witches and warlocks-

little monsters

behind the masks

 

bruised for days

her trick

was not a treat

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Reviewed by Amor Sabor 11/4/2010
Well done as usual. It has been awhile has it not?
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 4/17/2010
It's not Halloween but your creative expression is just as effective and enjoyable, Lori. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis
Reviewed by Janet Caldwell 3/23/2010
Wow! Last stanza stirs dark images. Love it beautiful lady! x
Reviewed by JMS Bell 10/31/2009
VERY GOOD IMAGERY...WELL DONE. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper 10/31/2009
deep halloween Lori, maybe she should have stuck with candy, treats
Reviewed by Dallas D'Angelo-Gary 10/29/2009
Wonderfully done, Lori.
Reviewed by Kate Burnside 10/28/2009
The first three fill me with the warm fuzzies, Lori, in the sense that I feel they address the exuberance of childhood innocence "behind the freakin mask!"... but my goodness, the counterpoint of the fist in the velvet glove of the fourth! The stark reality of life that is a living hell for some. Yes, this holiday is largely taken in fun, but can we be surprised if there's an upsurge in grievous bodily violence on the back of it? We jollify, glorify and act out gore then condemn the real thing... seems crazy to me... But I'll not be the spectre at the feast! Great Ku as always. thanks, Kate xx
Reviewed by Roger Ochs 10/27/2009
Clever and amusing. well done.
Reviewed by E T Waldron 10/26/2009
clever, fantastic Halloween ku,Lori! Loved all, but especially the last one;-)
Reviewed by John Flanagan 10/26/2009
Gorgeous renderings, Lori; the final one has a dark resonance and the intended pun makes it more so.
These are great.

John
Reviewed by Ronald Hull 10/26/2009
"Sweetly cute." he said, his breath heavy with chocolately hallow-tosis.

Ron
Reviewed by Felix Perry 10/26/2009
Strong diversity from sweet innocence to brutal reality...wow

Fee
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 10/26/2009
Smiled at the first three, BAM, hit by the fourth - powerfully penned sadness. :( Well done, Lori.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Gene Williamson 10/26/2009
Love these, Lori. Saddened by #4. -gene.
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart 10/26/2009
Oh my what a twist at the end!! Well penned and enjoyed Lori.
Reviewed by Bennett Kremen 10/26/2009
The last one's a bruiser.
Reviewed by Patrick Granfors 10/26/2009
Very entertaining...as Kuul as they come. I read the last two stanzas two different ways and prefer to look at it like Jerry and his red light district sense of humor. The other way puts a bit of a damper on of sadness on it all. Tie goes to the reader.Patrick
Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader) 10/26/2009
Damn, that's a clever one! Good stuff.
Reviewed by D Johnson 10/26/2009
What a creative way to keep the eyes reading until the end.

Cheers,
Dan
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) 10/26/2009
Hah! The last one / Gotta love it . . .
Reviewed by Annabel Sheila 10/26/2009
Absolutely loved them all!!! Your ku's are wonderful, Lori. Write on!!

Anna
Reviewed by Christine Alwin 10/26/2009
..each one is as good as the next!
Reviewed by Sherry Heim 10/26/2009
Each one is so clever, Lori, I loved them all. I love Halloween and I also love writing Halloween poems. I guess it is time to start thinking about doing that.
Take care,
Sherry
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 10/26/2009
Love the first one, and the last one is quite sad.
Reviewed by George Carroll 10/25/2009
Each one a treat



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