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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
7/29/2012 |
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Succinctly powerful in emotion and meaning expressed. Thank you, Lori. Love and best wishes,
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| Reviewed by Melie Bacon |
10/21/2011 |
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| Is the poem about a father at war, in a foreign country? |
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| Reviewed by Richard Orey |
11/27/2010 |
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Sensitive and strikingly vivid imagery! Love 'em!
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| Reviewed by Amor Sabor |
11/4/2010 |
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| You have mastered these well, Lori |
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| Reviewed by John Domino |
10/26/2010 |
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Wow, this is a great visual masterpiece. So many stray thoughts come to mind. Not all are related but it seems to focus on family.
Blessings,
John Michael Domino |
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| Reviewed by Barbara Terry |
8/24/2010 |
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These are strong words that have meaning and great visuals. Thank you for sharing.
May the Lord Bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and walk by your side. With love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister Barbie. |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner |
7/25/2010 |
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"4 ku" said in a Scottish accent brings a whole new meaning.
The first one hits home.
Two and three do not need to be, if wiser and controlled, egoless leaders who cared about life and not popularity, were in power.
What message does it sent the world when a "leader" moves in to his residence and the first thing he does is remove a bust of Churchill then blame his anti british stance on his great grandfather being brought over from africa. . .
Whoops sorry. The last one, i love the sound of church bells bringing the faithful together where all shapes and sizes sit and pray as one, together. Equals. the sound of the bells say all men are equal. In my indoctrinated, rose tinted view.
Great to see you writing on here, Miss America!
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
7/24/2010 |
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| FOUR STRONG WORKS THAT DEPICT THE SADNESS AND HOPE THAT CAN SPRING FROM BEING ALONE. A FINE WORK. THANKS FOR SHARING, LOVE AND BLESSINGS, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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| Reviewed by Patrick Granfors |
7/24/2010 |
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Somber & telling
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
7/24/2010 |
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I don't like ku, but love the ones penned by you. So much compassion, so much care.
The title of my second novel with a different meaning.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Eileen Granfors |
7/23/2010 |
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| I love the compactness of the 'ku form and the way you have presented the silence that surrounds these people. Nice. |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
7/21/2010 |
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| each haiku encapsulates its topic perfectly ... |
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| Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK |
7/21/2010 |
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Yep Shadowed By Religion...
TRASK |
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| Reviewed by Sherry Heim |
7/21/2010 |
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The world does have the feeling of every man/woman/child for themselves, these days. There seems to be some strange kind of isolation that we all are finding a sort of peace within. Shattered dreams are the special of the day. You really bring out all the emotion and meatiness of the situation. Love these and love reading you again.
Take care,
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
7/21/2010 |
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Such deep emotional turmoil expressed in just a few lines...well done.
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
7/21/2010 |
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Isolated, marginalized, the individual ranks low in our world schemes and (misguided?) ambitions and agendas...strong, pithy, relevant work.
Good to see you posting, Lori.
John |
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| Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper |
7/21/2010 |
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| for whom the bell tolls Lori, hopefully the bell beckons sugar and spice and everything nice for the child, and regardless graduation is a positive thing, good one Lori, cheers |
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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
7/21/2010 |
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And you've certainly captured the essence of the title. Lovely Ku's Lori!
Anna |
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| Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader) |
7/21/2010 |
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| Like the feeling of being a hostage of circumstance, trapped in a war of unspoken words, bell beckons, distant tear, so close and yet so far. Alone indeed. Welcome back. |
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