The Sitting
by
Leann Marshall
Monday, March 03, 2008
Rated "PG" by the Author.
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He tilts her head just so,
She has remembered the rest:
Hands relaxed upon a
Book of Verse,
Intent in meditation;
She brings no light with her,
He lifts the shade
To the flash of a dove’s wing,
The scent of linseed
Heavy in the room;
Shadows move in silence
Grow longer still,
He strokes with brush
Upon canvas
Carefully, like a lover;
Studies her in quiet repose
(She is too heavy,
Her nose too sharp,
She is no prize)
And chooses burnt sienna
For her eyes;
Still, she holds herself
With certain style,
A practiced flair,
And with his gift
Those other things
Will be forgiven;
She sighs,
A strand of auburn hair
Falls down upon
Curve of lily throat;
He waits, brush lifted,
To let her settle.
He would love her,
Would she let him.
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| Reviewed by Alonda Alloway |
3/18/2008 |
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| This was very visual. I like it! |
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
3/11/2008 |
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| Nice, beautiful words!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
3/10/2008 |
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Truly beautiful and meaningful verses, Leann. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
3/8/2008 |
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| OMGosh, this is most expressive, and leaves the poor bloke wondering... no woman is a prize, but someone to be enchanted and beguiled by, until all other thoughts cease.... |
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| Reviewed by Tavia McDowell |
3/5/2008 |
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Beautiful words were shared here. The flow of it, took me through a vision in my mind. Thanks for stopping by, and God bless.
Tavia |
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| Reviewed by Barbara Terry |
3/5/2008 |
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I can't add anymore than what Rose has already said. Thank you for sharing.
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your denn sister, Barbie |
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| Reviewed by Rose Rideout |
3/5/2008 |
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I can visualize him there in silence wishing he could do more then paint her picture as he longs to takes her in his heart. Great write Leann, Thank you for sharing.
Newfie Hugs, Rose |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
3/4/2008 |
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Ah, the blissful magic of the artists brush stokes so elogantly portrayed....
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Engler |
3/4/2008 |
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| I agree with all the others here, particularly the review written by Jill. I can only add, very well done. I enjoyed it....Jerry |
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| Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle |
3/4/2008 |
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Leann,
I love poetry that can be interpreted many different ways. In this poem, I could see an artist, admiring his model, as he painted her. Yet, I could also see a man, whose love for a woman who did not know or care he existed, longing for what cannot be.
This is a beautiful and exquisitely written piece.
Thanks,
Jill |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
3/4/2008 |
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Leann,
Your poem brings the portrait to life. The real beauty on canvas is in the subject. In all forms of art and life, being able to subdue the shadows, fill in the blemishes and embellish the subject matter is the difference between a good work and a masterpiece. Outstanding visuals my friend. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul. |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
3/4/2008 |
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Reading this the first time and then rereading it, I had the feeling that I was the artist savoring the model as I tried to capture her very being on canvas, trying to show her in her best light so to speak, only to realize she was beautiful in her own way and stirred passion just by being herself...
Fee |
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