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They believed in Jesus, were betrayed by family, rejected by Israel, tormented by court trials, and reported on by international media. ..

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Narrow View by anne cunningham Thursday, May 01, 2008 Not rated by the Author. Share Print Save Become a Fan
Narrow View Pinned, the balance sheets have no hospital corners and I can't bounce quarters or make sense of the half of this. Confined, the brick walls grow higher than sky and I can't scale concrete or weigh any viable options. Resigned, the bored directors gave up on this script and I can't remember my lines or which side of the stage is exit. Undermined the support beams reflect back the fog and I can't see any light or figure a way out of this tunnel.

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Reviewed by Felix Perry	5/1/2008

As a self styled want to be poet and a semi almost professional back ground actor this write intriqued me and caught my interest with all kinds of wonderful thoughts springing up from each verse. Enjoyed. hugs Fee




Reviewed by Cryssa C	5/1/2008

How clever... I especially love the first stanza and the pun of "bored directors" hee, hee... Cryssa




Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis	5/1/2008

Terrific word choices; I enjoyed the construct of your composition.