With - Without God
by uppalapati Lakshmi Prasanthi
Friday, November 15, 2002
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God! I was playing in your lap
I got everything with a clap
World was so beautiful a scenary
with full of liveliness and greenery
Calm shores with rhythmic music
cool breezes soothing the body
sacred hymns echoing the serene climate
chirping of birds, roaring of animals
every component of nature resonate
with the other
as if all they are together
Suddenly I jumped on to the ground,
to look around,
playing I ran,ran, ran
only to see myself far from you
and the distance grew
World turned out to be so harmful a valley
frightened I wished for an ally
pleasant sky begin to roar thunders
waves began dancing to its orders
stormy air scorching the body
moaning of birds, groaning of animals,
Satan's army is enjoying a date
so shocking is the change.
(I have written this two days back. I wished to modify and add
few more lines as a continuation of this, but I am so anxious to share this with you all,
so I typed as it is.
Please tell me what words we use to the cries of birds and animals when they are
angry or feeling sorry)
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|Reviewed by uppalapati Prasanthi (Reader)
|Shocked. I do not know that there is such a vulgar meaning for the word, "Clap".
What I mean is "Claps"(a sign of the king to summon his servants, and like an applause
when we see a good performance). The actual meaning is though I am not born as a queen, I got everything if I clap like a Royal person.
|Reviewed by jude forese
|great write... in english slang, "clap" in a sexual disease which may interfere with the american readers reference to "playing in your lap
I got everything with a clap"... unless that's what you intended...
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|lovely write, uppalapati! love, your friend, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) :)|
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)