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| Reviewed by Srinivas Surya (Reader) |
8/5/2003 |
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Don't worry, you willt ide over the loss. As I had mentioned in one of your reviews, "A person who makes you cry is not worth your tears, and those you cry for, will not make you cry ".
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| Reviewed by Vahini Epari |
7/4/2003 |
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| Hope for the best Shanti. Time shall bring Good days to us. |
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| Reviewed by Marilyn Seray |
4/24/2003 |
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| The last two lines are powerful! |
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| Reviewed by Sekhar |
2/11/2003 |
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| I think u hv so much tallent. ur peom is so nice. all the best for future |
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| Reviewed by raj |
2/2/2003 |
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nice poem continue it
u can succeed
wish u all the best |
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| Reviewed by dyvadhinam |
12/28/2002 |
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JAI-BABA
Your heart fixed in the frame of "BUT"
like a golden plate placed in show-case
"IF"it was not placed there
and covered in dust
who will recognise.
We wish more provision for
"IF" rather than "BUT"
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| Reviewed by Angels Near |
12/17/2002 |
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| This is very touching...Excellent expression of words! |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
12/17/2002 |
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| nice write!! thanks so much for sharing! |
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| Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader) |
12/17/2002 |
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Oh this is so sad yet endearing! :O)
Nikki |
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