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|Reviewed by Srinivas Surya (Reader)
|Don't worry, you willt ide over the loss. As I had mentioned in one of your reviews, "A person who makes you cry is not worth your tears, and those you cry for, will not make you cry ".
|Reviewed by Vahini Epari
|Hope for the best Shanti. Time shall bring Good days to us.|
|Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
|The last two lines are powerful!|
|Reviewed by Sekhar
|I think u hv so much tallent. ur peom is so nice. all the best for future|
|Reviewed by raj
|nice poem continue it
u can succeed
wish u all the best
|Reviewed by dyvadhinam
Your heart fixed in the frame of "BUT"
like a golden plate placed in show-case
"IF"it was not placed there
and covered in dust
who will recognise.
We wish more provision for
"IF" rather than "BUT"
|Reviewed by Angels Near
|This is very touching...Excellent expression of words!|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|nice write!! thanks so much for sharing!|
|Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
|Oh this is so sad yet endearing! :O)