|Reviewed by Srinivas Surya (Reader)
|Wow !! These few lines are so intense...they punch you in your heart.....Good work. One of my friends wrote
" I burn my candles at both ends,
It gives a lovely light
But, Ah ! My friends
and Oh! My Foes,
It will not last the night '
|Reviewed by Vahini Epari
|To pity distress is but human, to relieve it is Godlike.
We have in life many toubles in many forms and kinds... and the power to face the storm is wildly within us...after we face them , we find that they have no substance or reality left... Let's Overcome.
very true(your poem) when time is really bad.
|Reviewed by Sridhar
|Really a beautiful thought.
|Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
|an intense one|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|are they stones or gems?|
|Reviewed by J. Murphy