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| Reviewed by Robin Labenberg |
10/10/2004 |
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| Good Poem and Joe I still love ya!! |
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| Reviewed by Peter Adotey Addo |
9/22/2004 |
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This is a wonderful and very creative piece of work.I enjoyed your choice of words.
Thank you for sharing your work |
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
8/1/2004 |
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A very creative write indeed! Loved this.
Sandie May Angel |
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| Reviewed by Deirdre Barringer (Reader) |
7/3/2004 |
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| I thought this was going to be gross with with the word lobotomy in it. But I like your jelly bean imagery, i think the black ones taste the best actually. |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
6/24/2004 |
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| this is a intense dissection of emotions ... great imagery! |
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| Reviewed by ya mama (Reader) |
6/23/2004 |
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joe this is the best thing i read all day.
you should read the prose poems of Russell Edson, James Tate, Charles Simic. you'll dig them.
wow, keep it up man. |
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| Reviewed by Theresa Koch |
6/23/2004 |
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| This was quite exceptionally penned! |
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| Reviewed by Janet Caldwell (author) |
6/22/2004 |
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This is absolutley my cup of tea, I LOVE poetry like this. Good job Joe.
JC xoxoxo |
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| Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang |
6/21/2004 |
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Are we a little DOWN on
ourselves tonight? I hope you are
doing okay this evening! Go see a movie, "Garfield",
it will cheer you up considerably!
It did me!
Becca |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
6/21/2004 |
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Love jellybean...but then again....some are bitter!!
Like this one!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by OnepoetGem * |
6/21/2004 |
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| really enjoyed this Joe, it was really cool. G |
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| Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson |
6/20/2004 |
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| Hi Joe, makes me wonder abnout my wife's jelly beans. I don't think she has any. You are the creative one....... |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
6/20/2004 |
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| Yes, the metaphor of jelley beans for thoughts, as in "He's lost all his marbles," is very creative. |
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| Reviewed by Lady Peg |
6/20/2004 |
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| This is a wonderful poem. Very creative. |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
6/20/2004 |
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Hey Joe! About time you paid us a visit;-)
Love the poem, very creative love lost scenario
( I see no url at the bottom;-)... |
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| Reviewed by Tami Ryan |
6/20/2004 |
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| Whoa. This is good stuff, Joe. Thank you. |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
6/20/2004 |
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| So sad and very creative. GREAT write! |
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