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| Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper |
6/13/2004 |
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| quite a poem Joe. enjoyed, G |
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
6/11/2004 |
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Very nicely-done.
May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o) |
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| Reviewed by * ashura |
6/6/2004 |
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Vampiric and haunting and tightly written.
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| Reviewed by Tami Ryan |
6/6/2004 |
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| Much sensuality in this one. I could feel the shivers and sighs. |
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| Reviewed by Debra Conklin |
5/30/2004 |
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Now that's what I call a voracious lover!
Debbie |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) |
5/30/2004 |
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| Compelling and darkly beautiful. |
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| Reviewed by Amor Sabor |
5/29/2004 |
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Sometimes love can be sweet surrender...and yet, more potent than a blood red wine. Great piece...well expressed.
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
5/25/2004 |
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| A powerful description of sweet surrender and a thirsty longing, I'd say, Joe! Can so relate to your Biog - and you're right... you DO hide it well - like me, perhaps!? I think that a lot of my writing is in some way talking about the inner battle against low self-esteem ingrained in me from my preconception, I think!! But, hey Buddy, it's a battle worth fighting and winning becuase you, like I, have a right to be here and are VALUED and VALUABLE. Take it from me, that's true! Loved you visit. More of both, please!! Thank you, Kate :))) |
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| Reviewed by Sheila Jones (Reader) |
5/24/2004 |
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This is awesome writing, Joe, just superb imagery!
Excellently written!
Love, Sheila
Thank you, for your kind review! |
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| Reviewed by A PAX |
5/24/2004 |
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You into Ann Rice? I am!
penetrating write!
pax.......lolol.......A
ps......i agree, vamps are sexy. |
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| Reviewed by Jane Flowers (Reader) |
5/21/2004 |
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| Wonderful. Simplistic. Art. |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
5/15/2004 |
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| Well done, Joe. Love and peace to you. Regis |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
5/15/2004 |
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Chilling but sensual in some way Methinks!!
Excellet write Joe!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya |
5/4/2004 |
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| Joe...very good descriptive write!!! |
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| Reviewed by wood fisher (Reader) |
3/26/2004 |
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Hi, Joe
I like this poem very much. However, one man told my girl that he was the author of this poem. I can not judge if that man is you or not. Are you willing to answer three questions:
1. Are you 165cm?
2. Do you wear glasses?
3. Are you a English teacher?
If really you, oh, my! If not, I will hit that guy!
Thanks! |
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| Reviewed by Janet Caldwell |
6/14/2003 |
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Yummy is all I have to say! ;)
Love, JC xoxoxo |
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| Reviewed by Marielle |
2/2/2003 |
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| Interesting, sensual, intriguing...Leaves a lot to the imagination. Love "Red Wine" Keep at it, Joe. |
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| Reviewed by Pat Alvarado |
12/7/2002 |
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| I always sleep with the covers pulled up to my chin, just in case! |
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| Reviewed by Buzz |
10/21/2002 |
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| This was a little too cool for my taste, hot, pumped up & ripped. |
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| Reviewed by Kelly Steed & Kelly Roberts |
6/26/2002 |
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| Very POWERFUL Write! |
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| Reviewed by Allison Alexander |
6/13/2002 |
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| WOW |
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| Reviewed by Shezray Faisal |
6/11/2002 |
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| Whoa!!! |
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| Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks |
6/10/2002 |
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| ooooeeee...in the heat of a moment! Do you display the 'penetrating' marks? lol |
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| Reviewed by Nisa Howe (Reader) |
5/26/2002 |
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| You have the ability to say a lot..bring forth vivid pictures in a few words.. my applause. |
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| Reviewed by Trixie Love |
5/25/2002 |
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Quite interesting... :)
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| Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson |
5/25/2002 |
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| um........yes tasty the drink of aquired taste.......good write |
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| Reviewed by Victoria Murray |
5/19/2002 |
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| I enjoyed your poem very much! Nicely written and unique! |
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| Reviewed by Energy Shifter |
5/19/2002 |
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| Bring on some more soon Joe |
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| Reviewed by Heather Lauren |
5/10/2002 |
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| Joe I'm so glad I found your writing again. I look forward to more from you. BTW this one is my fav. Very visual. |
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| Reviewed by Kathy Anderson |
4/30/2002 |
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| Interesting view of wine and something more? Hmmmm.....like a lot! Keep writing man! |
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| Reviewed by Rita Putatunda |
4/14/2002 |
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| Red Red Wi-i-i-ne - Don't let me be alone--Nice one. |
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| Reviewed by Rita Putatunda |
4/6/2002 |
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| Gulp! Pretty scary love - but love is kind of scary, isn't it... |
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| Reviewed by Sharon |
3/31/2002 |
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| Your usual great work. |
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| Reviewed by Joe McCarthy |
3/31/2002 |
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| I can't deny the sexuality behind this poem. I'm just not sure whether I consciously or unsciously intended it. Or perhaps I'm in denial over that. Either way, I think their has always been an element of sexuality to the concept of vampires. Not to mention that giving someone a hicky on their neck is a simulation of the vampire act. You're actually sucking your lover's blood to the surface of their skin. When you walk away, a mark remains indicating that you were there. It's just not two holes. |
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| Reviewed by Sharron Tyrrell |
3/30/2002 |
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| very interesting dark poem :) |
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| Reviewed by samdavid1 |
3/27/2002 |
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| Hey Joe good to se ya here. Nice sweet? Poem. Good job. SD1 |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
3/25/2002 |
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| I'll never look at red wine the same way again :-)) |
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| Reviewed by Aamie Burnley |
3/21/2002 |
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| ... joe, joe, joe; have mercy!! |
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| Reviewed by Cathy McGough |
3/21/2002 |
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| Chilling poem Joe! :) |
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| Reviewed by Theresa Koch |
3/21/2002 |
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| Exceptional writing~ |
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| Reviewed by Theresa Koch |
3/18/2002 |
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| so a vampire has found you out!!! |
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| Reviewed by Jo Janoski |
3/17/2002 |
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| Yikes! ;o) |
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| Reviewed by Jeanette Foresta |
3/16/2002 |
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| Wishful thinking? Good to see you here Joe! |
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| Reviewed by Jeanette Foresta |
3/16/2002 |
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| Hmmmmm... Dangerous vintage (smile)...... |
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| Reviewed by kone simons |
3/16/2002 |
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| Dreams and vampires, Interesting combination....Buffy (I mean, kone) |
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| Reviewed by Melissa Rives |
3/16/2002 |
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| Glad to see you here! Excellent write....very creative! |
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| Reviewed by Ron http://authorsden.com/noslexa (Reader) |
3/16/2002 |
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| "red red wine" Joe! About time you wrote something. Thanks for your comments on my art. I plan to draw a lot more authors, but why do they keep saying I'm a visitor or a reader? |
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| Reviewed by Deirdre Barringer (Reader) |
3/16/2002 |
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| This would be great for Halloween. |
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| Reviewed by Masarat Daud (Reader) |
3/16/2002 |
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| Great write! |
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| Reviewed by fancy lady |
3/16/2002 |
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it is a rare woman
who can truly enjoy
such fine wine
bite without bruising
and bleed without pain
... rare indeed |
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| Reviewed by Robert JueAce |
3/16/2002 |
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| love red wine... |
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| Reviewed by Robert Jude |
3/16/2002 |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
3/16/2002 |
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| red or white wine...? |
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| Reviewed by Florence Fry |
3/16/2002 |
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| A vampire is no laughing matter :( Hope you are dominant :) |
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| Reviewed by Robin Labenberg |
3/15/2002 |
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| I feel like I missed something since David is laughing because I thought this was a sensual write.Great sentiment in the last stanza. |
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| Reviewed by David Norris (Reader) |
3/15/2002 |
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| This one made me laugh out loud, chuckle chuckle |
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