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by Jackson Aniefiok

Friday, August 08, 2008
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Words written for the broken love

So much pains in the eyes of love.
I guess the tears is not for fun.
Pieces of  broken heart down  the floor.
The ocean of emotions flowing like blood.
Broken promises standing like a tall wall.
Memories of love written as pages of history.
It is the otherside of love.
Two hearts once the best of friends.
Holding hands walking on the parth of dreams.
It is so hard to recall,
A mighty rain that wash away the dreams.
Painting the colors of their love in black.
The goldern darkness that overshadow  light.
The eclipse of lust that brought about pains.
It is the otherside of of love.
I wish I could pierce  the heart of love
To whipe away the tears in it's eyes
To gather the broken hearts.
To paint love in the color of light!
It will be my pride.
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Reviewed by Diana Wiles 1/28/2009
This is a very powerful poem, yet extremely tender too...
Because Love is such a huge emotion...the otherside of Love when it goes wrong is just as dramatic....

Love, Diana
Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson 11/6/2008
Beautiful ,its compelling and sad , yet tender emotions seep through it ! Its really good!....M
Reviewed by Liana Margiva 9/3/2008
EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!!! ONE OF THE BEST POEMS, WHICH I EVER READ!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Reviewed by Susie McCray 8/17/2008
Very nice poem. Sometimes love hurts but we have to overcome the pain.
Reviewed by Rosemarie Skaine 8/14/2008
Powerful and well written. R
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 8/13/2008
It is easy for me to relate to the sentiments that you express within your verses here, Jackson. Thank you. Love and peace to you,

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse 8/13/2008
Hello Jackson
The Other Side Of Love Indeed Does Show Many Facets of Pain
If Only Love's Loss Didn't Hurt So Much...but then Love Calls & Embraces To Heal Us Too & Dry The Tears of Our Hearts...
Much Love & Happiness To You
Embraced ~ Embrassť
Reviewed by Lois Christensen 8/10/2008
I can relate well to this. My first husband and I were so close, then I got mentally ill, and went to State Hosp and he wanted a divorce. I could never understand quite why he would not wait for me to get well. He said he fell out of love. that is why. So I made a new life with Tom and loved him very much til he died. I did not reject him and his love. The otherside of love is quite profanely not quite right.
Reviewed by John Flanagan 8/9/2008
I like the point of view in this, Aniefiok, and you express it with strength and conviction.
Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle 8/8/2008
This is a very good poem.Unfortunately the harsh reality sometimes is that love can break a person up in so many ways.That is indeed the true dark side or the other side of love.But hey we can always rebound and start fresh in terms of enjoying our lives to the fulliest.take care

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) 8/8/2008
Great writing...enjoyed...Hugssss..stay safe and well

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