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|Reviewed by Amor Sabor
|Excellent wording, Sara. The images these lines spun make the verses come together.|
|Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
|It sounds like it reads, Sara, contrived. At first. A good excercise in poetics, but not memoriable, dig deeper. ..rereading.. Ah, nevermind, you did!
you could be free
hushed word of mouth
to swallow us both
Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
|Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
|I love the way you weave this all together. This is a really good poem.|