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Bashing
by Sara J Cunningham

Monday, February 10, 2003

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she thinks im writing bad things about her? then i will write bad things about her...

i put your likeness
in a line of poetry
up in the ranks
as it were,
of the greats of literature
and i do not mention you again
i tell the story of the poem
it flows from me like water
and you are mad
because i posted you online
but no one knows
who you are
and no one really cares
but you
do you know how poets work?
they take things
from real life
and there it is
plastered on paper
absolute beauty
you think this world
revolves around you
and you accuse me
of the same thing
well, MY world does
revolve around me
and doesn't contain you
within itís atmosphere
but this common world
that everyone lives in
this world revolves around
a big round orb
called the sun
so stop prying into me
stop eavesdropping on me
stop guessing ahead
to incorrect answers
assumptions of stupidity
and when i tell you
i don't want to hear your voice
stop talking for a moment
give me some time
because your words piss me off
and you donít want to piss me off
not anymore
not anymore

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Reviewed by kelly 3/20/2003
i think its really cheap that you delete people's comments about you because you don't like them!
Reviewed by You like stickers...right 2/13/2003
This bashing was just that...a time to vent. Every one needs that...and here is a good place for sara to do it. Is it better that she does it here in a productive, quiet manner or that she starts a fight at home?
Reviewed by Sara Cunningham 2/13/2003
and this kelly... the comment directly below mine, yea... that is the "woman" i have to live with who the poem is about, and i really dont appreciate the fact that she wrote that about me online, but i can understand that i called her the same thing but in a more poetic way... id like to let you all know that i am sorry for bringing this factor of my life onto the site... and the only reason i wrote this was because she accused me of writing about her and i did not... but im sick of getting accused of things i did not do, so i decided to do the things she accused me of so she could see how bad i could really be... maybe i am a bitch...
Reviewed by kelly 2/13/2003
I think you are a good poet but you still don't have the right to write about me online. I think you are a self centered bitch who only cares about herself. I am allowed to think of my feelings from time to time because I put up with your crapy mood swings and irrational feelings all the time. Everyone is sick of it!
Reviewed by jude forese 2/10/2003
that's putting it on the line... well crafted expression...
Reviewed by Nancy D. 2/10/2003
Venting feels so good.
Nancy
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) 2/10/2003
Good!!
Reviewed by Josephine Bohen 2/10/2003
well there i could not have said it better my own self. well done
josie
Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader) 2/10/2003
Well who ever made you angry definitly deserves the bashing that they get no one has the right to look down upon a great poet like you. you have such a masterfulway with words and imagees it is nice great job on this one
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