Would this work?
I bought a clear balloon,
And into it I blew,
Every foul thought, moment of bitterness, anger,
Pain, heartache, doubt, resentment, fear.
The clear balloon turned black and the skin was tight.
I felt free.
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|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|I wrote one similar to this several years ago, "I Wish", when I was frustrated with my boss ... it's always good to release. :) Well done, Eileen, nice reading you again!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by jude forese
|nice ... quite unique ...|
|Reviewed by Sophia Ann Montoya
|Excellent visual !!|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|I like it and love the idea that the mind could do this so easily, when my daughter got married she wrote her maiden name on a white helium balloon and holding my hand she let it go into the night to symbolize her becoming the wife to her husband although she assured me I would always be her star.
|Reviewed by Linda Settles
|Breathe it out!!! I think it might help at least. But I don't know if it turns black. You may a tinge of multiple other hues mixed into the darkness. The trick is to keep that powerful balloon from floating away with you! :-|