Parallel Universes
by
Eileen Clemens Granfors
Tuesday, July 14, 2009
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Odd, waves receding
Exposing sharp, barren shoals
Tsunami warning.
Easier to sleep
Ignore the storm’s destruction
One island untouched.
Another deep crack
In the heart’s very center
More waves tower, break.
All is swept away
Thoughts of higher ground, safety
Lost in the fury.
Prevention? Easy.
Be open to connection
Look, see, listen.
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| Reviewed by ~ H (Reader) |
7/23/2009 |
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| Excellent advice. Holly |
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| Reviewed by D Johnson |
7/16/2009 |
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Eileen, a great series in building on each Ku... Well done. Coming from one who spent the last 4 1/2 years living in America's prime Tsunami Zone.... Seaside, Oregon, your words of advice are very wise.
Cheers,
Dan |
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| Reviewed by J'nia Fowler |
7/16/2009 |
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| Mustn't keep one's head in the sand. Very good. J'nia |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
7/15/2009 |
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Wise advice as we get nowhere with a closed mind and heart. Lovethe photograph, very enticing...
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
7/14/2009 |
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A fine string of meaningful haiku, Eileen. Thank you. Love and best wishes,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
7/14/2009 |
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I enjoyed this one Eileen, a series that blends into a story and keeps the reader in tune from first word to last.
hugs
fee |
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
7/14/2009 |
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And live, Eileen, to see another day, one we can observe perhaps
from that other universe, or vice versa. -gene.
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| Reviewed by Lori Moore |
7/14/2009 |
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| You have crafted a marvelous parallel. |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
7/14/2009 |
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COMMUNICATION IS SO IMPORTANT...BUT SOMETIMES WE CANNOT COMPREHEND THE SEVERITY OF A SITUATION UNTIL IT IS UPON US. WRITTEN WELL WITH GOOD IMAGERY. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
7/14/2009 |
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You describe how close we are to destruction, to the whims of a storm - one place, unscathed, another, devastated - well done, Eileen.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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