|Reviewed by Jimmy Holder
|Being in a dark place is not the problem for or to me.... It is the inability to see or visualize the light....in a way that i (we) can live with...or change
|Reviewed by L. Figgins
|Exellent, Melissa! Near-perfect cadence and 19th century elegance...|
|Reviewed by Dan Zuewski (Reader)
|wow, Melissa, that was beautiful and sad... and very well-formed... I've missed reading you...
How are you doing? It's been a while! Hope all is well! :)
|Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
|Hey Sis! So good to see and read you again.....Fine, fine work....the best of the best....
Now don't stay away so long! ;)
Ty, Dani xx
|Reviewed by Theresa Koch
|For all the losses I have met
the tears that keep my pillow wet,
rise up once more to meet me here
within this cage of my own fear.
WOW just Awesome!
|Reviewed by jude forese
|yes, very beautiful poetry, indeed ...|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|This is a beautiful poem, Melissa. It grabs me by the soul. Thank you. Love and peace. Regis|
|Reviewed by Sue Hess
|welcome back melissa, this is excellent|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|OMIGOD, it's YOU!! MELISSA!! I am sooo happy you are back; you have been MISSED!! WELCOME BACK!!
Wonderful poem; very nice! You haven't lost your touch! Well done!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
(((HUGS))) to Cody, Hannah, and Mitchell too! (I remembered their names! LOL)
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Most beautiful and touching read!!
Thanks for this offering...and wlcome back...been a long time HUH?
|Reviewed by m j hollingshead
|lovely work. happy to see you are writing again!|
|Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
|This does really work well in the way that it flows. A very beautiful poem.|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|I did a double take when I saw the name;-) A splendid poem
as you do so well,good to see you!;-)
|Reviewed by Fritz Barnes
|Oh my, Melissa, I loved this! It flows beautifully, much enjoyed. :)|