|Reviewed by L. Figgins
|What wisdom in this poem! "...without the dark I'd find no light...without them both there'd be no me" Amen!|
|Reviewed by Phillip William Allen
|Poetry at its best. TY for sharing|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|excellent message culminating in the last two lines ...
without understanding darkness and pain there can be no light to gain ...
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|Wow Melissa, this was excellent, last two lines really struck my heart, outstanding poetry,
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|Excellent piece of work...BHUWAN!!!!|
|Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
|There is nothing ordinary about this write..it's speaks without prejudice..
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Fine piece of work Melissa!!
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|The duality Melissa, who knows it better than you?;-)!
Fine poem, even with the pain!
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|"To quit would be to give up living
everything I touch or see,
without the dark I'd find no light...without them both
there'd be no me"
Very meaningful verses, Melissa. Thank you. Love and peace. Regis
|Reviewed by m j hollingshead
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|Your such a fine poetry writer
I have to have that dark to sleep...
Don't be gone so long next time
Have really missed ya!
|Reviewed by William DeVault
|Well rendered and expressive. I'll have to spend some time reading your works now.|
|Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
|The last line is so profound and you are right to quit would mean no you so don't quit.|
|Reviewed by Carrie Deveney
|its true that there'd be no light without the dark..life is a balance between the two and you've captured it nicely. :)
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado